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Requests / Re: Little item sentences
« on: July 30, 2014, 07:29:36 pm »
Seems not.
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1)How to make a demon`s sphere, I made a demons stiletto in chapter 2 and stilled second part of it from fudo in chapter 6, but stil don`t know where to find a third part.Look at the item list in my sig.
Well, and now they are all gone. It seems.
There wasn't many around here in the first place
And so I read this one, quite interesting, but 10 page short chapter about the main character, but then I have to jump to the other side of the world like three times and read about three other characters who for some reason don't have any contact with eachother. If I'm supposed to wonder what is happening to the friends of the main character, while he is hidden in some forrest learning some awesome magic from the elves, why not let me wonder? Instead, the author shows me everything every ten pages. If a main character worries about his friends he hasn't seen for months - good, but why do I have to know what they are doing, while he doesn't? You know what is the most interesting part of any book? That you don't know everything. The story of the main character may be like 20% of everything that is going on during the book, but why take all the suspense and show the reader the other 79%? What, you really think that other 1% you don't show is going to make me interested? Damn, you're dumb. If someone has to create 5 parallel stories in addition to the main one, then it means that he just can't write more than 100 pages about the plot he invented about the main character. And that means he shouldn't write any more than 100 page novels at all.Which book you're talking about?
Dragons taken directly from Neverwinter NightsYou mean Dungeons and Dragons?
Or maybe the book is going to be a totally different story? No Phodom, no Galeoth, no Balgaron?The book is meant to be either a sequel to TCO, or a completely new story, which either way won't feature Phodom, Fradz, or Galeoth.