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Title: Competition #33
Post by: Aeroblyctos on November 21, 2011, 02:28:36 pm

Competition Idea

I've removed the current Gate Puzzle from chapter 6 and I'll need a new one. It's time to create a puzzle for this place.

(http://www.tcocampaign.com/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=986.0;attach=357;image)


Hints

• Try to make the puzzle small as possible without taking much space.
• You can include some fighting in the puzzle(as a punishment, as a final boss, or the whole puzzle can be a boss fight but there must be an unique way of killing the boss)
• It is possible use objects like elevators and regions.
• You can take ideas from other games but please try to make it your own idea at least somehow.
• I've added red circles to places where the puzzle can be(look the end of this post).
• Also try give the player some information how to solve this puzzle.

Competition Rules

• The idea have to be yours.
• You can make unlimited amount of entries.
• I will have all the rights to edit the rules all the time(I will do it correctly and I will be fair for everyone).

Competition Prizes

The winner of this competition will have his or her name to Hall Of Fame and will be credited as "Competition Winners" and "Idea Giver". If you have one more than once you'll be credited automatically as "Great Idea Giver". Also any other ideas that I'll use will be credited as "Idea Giver".



Judging

I'm the only one who will judge the winner of the competition. I will judge all entries. The amount of entries you post will not decrease your chance to win in any way. However, if there are a lot of entries or horrible entries, I'll have the right to kick some of them away in order to make the final judge easier for me.

This is the order how I judge:

• Is your idea creative and fresh?
• Can I possibly create your idea?
• Is the puzzle small enough so I can put it to chapter 6?
• The presentation?

Deadline

The competition begins immediately and conclude at earliest 15.12.2011 or when I judge the competition.



Final Words

Good luck, may the best idea win. If you have questions, ask.

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: Aeroblyctos on November 22, 2011, 09:02:03 am

It would be good if the puzzle would fit there but I think it's possible to get some more space.

Title: Not as good as DD:D
Post by: Blackdoom59 on November 22, 2011, 11:29:40 am

                                                Phodom Alone
                                                         Puzzle


Phodom and Fradz enter the area - Dialogue

Phodom:Well , Fradz , here we are , another complicated labirinth.
Fradz:Way to ea-
? ? ?: Fradz , it's  time.
Phodom:Sorry , did you say something?
Fradz:Enter alone , Phodom.I got something to do outside Kar'gath.
Phodom:This is irrevelant , you can't jus leave me.
*Fradz gets outside the labirinth*
Fradz:Sorry , Phodom.I cannot be part of this  , call me when you're done.
*Fradz gets hit by lightning , then teleports himself out of the labirinth*
Phodom:Fradz , wait!Damn!Now I'm stuck here alone , unless I call him and give up.

If Phodoms gets out of the Puzzle area , Fradz will come and the quest will fail
In every corner of the area , there is a champion skeleton with huge hp , no mp , huge atk but low AS.The skeleton has reincarnation with 0 calldown , but takes 50 seconds to reincarnate.

After 25 killed skeletons - Cinematic

Phodom:Curse this!When will it end?
? ? ?:Calm yourself Phodom.
Phodom:Who...are you?
? ? ?:I'l give you a gift Phodom.
Phodom:What ...Is happening!?!

The skeletons all @ the area are charging to Phodom.Phodom gets blessed(+500dmg , +30 armor ,+6000 hp , +3000 mp , + 100 all stats , + 25 hp regen).After 1 minute off skeletons:

Phodom:This is amazing!Yet they keep coming.You , hwo gaved me this power , show yourself!
*A ilusion of Fradz gets inside the area*
Ilusion:Phodom , you have turned your back on me , prepare to die!


Skeletons are still attacking Phodom , while Phodom must cocentrate only on the ilusion(wich blinks).
When the Ilusion dies:

Phodom:What have I done?
*All skeletons die*
Phodom:Fradz  , answer me!
? ? ?:Well done , dragon slayer.
Phodom:You!I don't need this power , give me back Fradz!
*Phodom looses the bonus*
? ? ?:Hahahahah!
*The illusion is coming back to life , while all other skeletons on the ground are shifting into innocent people.
Man1:Kill him , Phodom , save us!
Women1:Don't fail us like you faild your family!
Phodom:What...What is the meaning of tihis!?!
*Phodom slams the ground with all his might , turning the people into bones once more.
Ilusion:Thank you , Phodom.
*Phodom teleports himself out of the area*
Phodom:What has happend ...Fradz?
Fradz:Old fatass!Where have you been?
Phodom:I am so happy to see you again.
Fradz:Gross!
*Phodom and fradz are moving back to the corridor , but Phodom turns and looks to the labirinth*
Phodom(whisper):What was that?I've grow tired of secrets
? ? ?:All in time , Dragon Slayer.

Reward:10 honor points(yeah it might be to much but the skeletons should be realy strong  , even when Phodom is overpowered).

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: /=FoX=/-Eragon on November 22, 2011, 12:08:30 pm

Hello,

This post has been taken back to the Den by author.

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: /=FoX=/-Eragon on November 23, 2011, 01:18:20 pm

Hello,

Quote from: Blackdoom59 on November 23, 2011, 12:35:29 pm

No it hasn't.

Hold on, I know this one.

A wizzard did it, right? ;P

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: Blackdoom59 on November 23, 2011, 02:42:26 pm

Quote from: DD Canada on November 23, 2011, 01:18:20 pm

Hello,

Quote from: Blackdoom59 on November 23, 2011, 12:35:29 pm

No it hasn't.

Hold on, I know this one.

A wizzard did it, right? ;P

Well ...erm...(ah f*ck...).
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
^.^ - no?
<.< - Black wall...Blackdoom...Blackwalldoom!
>.> - Nothing , really?The hell?
>.< - I've got something on my face.

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: Doomlord on November 26, 2011, 05:46:42 am

REVENGE OF DOOM LORD - MINI GAME/BOSS ARENA
Disclaimer: Texts in <....> represent actions.
Requirement: Completed Portal quest in chapter 5 and acquired Doom Sword.
Location: The room in the middle of the competition picture (Same as DD's).
Description: The mini-game has 5 stages:

• ENTRANCE: Cinematic: (some soothing music required)
  P: This room seems so strange, the scent ... it is so familiar. Like my wife's.
  F: I can't smell anything.
  P: You don't even know her. How could you ...
  <A 30% transparent Birgitta appears near Phodom>
  P: Birgitta ...
  F: What the heck ? - Stop Phodom, it's a trap !
  P: You're a fool to say that, Fradz. Birgitta, I'm home again. I'll never let you go out of my reach. We'll rebuild our family.
  <Phodom walks near the illusion>
  F: STOP! - Damnit Phodom, you geezer!
  ? ? ? : Now you'll pay dearly for what you have done to me back in Dragon Inn.
  <A black Doom Lord appears near Phodom, replacing the Birgitta illusion. He swings his sword and Phodom fell to the ground (unconscious - not dead yet)>
  Doom Lord: Finally, such an easy prey - Now I'll reclaim my weapon.
  <If P has Doom Sword -> Cinematic continues -> If F has Doom Sword, Doom Lord teleports near Fradz. He swings his sword and Fradz fell to the ground -> Doom Sword is removed from inventory>
  Doom Lord: This warrior is perfect for my upcoming ritual - with his vengeance and power, I'll be invincible.
  <Doom Lord teleports away, taking Phodom with him>
  Interlude: After 15 minutes...
  F: Ugh, my head. What happened ?
  ? ? ? : Phodom has been abducted. Make haste before all is too late.
  F: It doesn't look like I have another option.
  <Fradz moves forward>
  
• BATTLE #1 - FIRST GATE
  • Cinematic:
    F: Show yourself. I'm here to take Phodom back.
    <Doom Lord appears near Fradz, trying to backstab him but Fradz evades the blow successfully>
    Doom Lord: You're quick. Let's see how quick you can be. Forward my minions, destroy this insect for me.
    <Doom Lord summons few smaller Doom Guards then teleports away>
    F: Bring it on.
  • Battle:
    2 portals appear on each side of the corridor. Doom Guards will spawn from the portals. Kill 10 Doom Guards to open the gate to the next battle or kill 25 Doom Guards to complete the Battle. If the Battle is completed successfully the player is given a "Destiny's Sword fragment". 
• BATTLE #2 - SECOND GATE
  • Cinematic:
    F: Give Phodom back !
    <Doom Lord appears near Fradz, trying to backstab him but Fradz again evades the blow successfully>
    Doom Lord: You're lucky indeed. But your little friend here won't be as lucky as you. As soon as the ritual is completed, his body is MINE !
    <Doom Lord calls down multiple Infernals then teleports away>
    F: I have to save that fatass - And quick.
    <A 20 minute timer starts counting down>
  • Battle:
    An invulnerable Portal appears at the end of the corridor. Infernals will spawn from the Portal. For each 10 Infernals killed, a Hellfire Infernal will be spawned. Each Hellfire Infernal killed will reduce the Portal's HP by 35%. Kill a Hellfire Infernal to open the gate to the next battle or destroy the Portal to complete the Battle. If the Battle is completed successfully the player is given a "Destiny's Sword fragment".
• BATTLE #3 - THIRD GATE
  • Cinematic:
    F: Come and fight me, you coward. Stop being such a sissy monster.
    <Doom Lord appears near Fradz>
    Doom Lord: Very well then. See if you can hold on to your words.
    F: One shall stand, one shall fall.
  • Battle:
    The objective in this battle is to reduce Doom Lord's HP to 75%. Doom Lord in this stage has War Stomp (stunning for 3 seconds) and Cripple (reducing AS and MS by 45%). The player can steal a "Destiny's Sword fragment" from Doom Lord during this battle.
  • Cinematic:
    Doom Lord: You're much stronger than I thought. But no matter, the ritual is near complete. My ascension is near !
    <Doom Lord teleports away>
    F: I will hunt you down no matter what. Do you hear me !!!
    
• BATTLE #4 - FOURTH GATE
  • Cinematic:
    F: Will this ever end ?
    ? ? ? : Phodom's life is at stake. You mustn't let him down.
    F: I won't.
    <Doom Lord appears near Fradz>
    Doom Lord: Looks like you are about to.
    F: You coward. Just end this right here right now.
    Doom Lord: As you wish. Your quest shall end here.
  • Battle:
    The objective in this battle is to reduce Doom Lord's HP to 50% (his starting HP is still 100%). Doom Lord in this stage has War Stomp (stunning for 3 seconds), Cripple (reducing AS and MS by 45%) and Summoning Doom Guards. The player can (again) steal a "Destiny's Sword fragment" from Doom Lord during this battle.
  • Cinematic:
    Doom Lord: You're powerful but you've run out of time, hero. I won.
    <Doom Lord teleports away>
    <Timer stops counting>
    F: Damnit. Can't be !
    
• BATTLE #5 - FIFTH GATE
  • Cinematic:
    F: No, it can't be.
    <Doom Lord appears near Fradz>
    Doom Lord: His body is mine now !
    <Doom Lord summons Phodom and attempts to finish the ritual>
    ? ? ? : Don't even dream about it.
    <A bolt of lightning strikes down, knocking back Doom Lord and waking Phodom>
    P: What ? ... Where am I ?... It feels like a dream of blackness.
    Doom Lord: My power. My destiny. NOOOOOO!
    Doom Lord: Both of you shall die here. You shall all become sacrifices for my ritual !
    
  • Battle:
    The objective in this battle is to slay Doom Lord. Doom Lord in this stage has War Stomp (stunning for 3 seconds), Cripple (reducing AS and MS by 45%), Summoning Doom Guards and Summoning Infernals. The player can (once again) steal a "Destiny's Sword fragment" from Doom Lord during this battle.
  • Cinematic:
    Doom Lord: My ... destiny. Don't stop ... me ... from ... my destiny ... I ... failed you ... master !
    <Doom Lord falls down>
    F: He is slain. How did he get resurrected anyways ?
    P: Maybe we will never know.
    
• REWARD
  Doom Lord drops Destiny's Sword and Doom Sword (taken earlier). The Destiny's Sword can be upgraded with fragments collected from previous battles. For example a player collects 3 fragments and Destiny's Sword can be upgraded up to Destiny's Sword III (the Romanian number represents the number of fragments and the power of the item).
  

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: /=FoX=/-Eragon on November 26, 2011, 06:22:39 am

Hello,

That's a nice one, doomlord, the basic format is close to mine, but you've even more options and other tweaks, that could be for better or worse, I don't know, but I like the "comeback" of doom lord. :)

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: Doomlord on November 26, 2011, 06:28:25 am

Quote from: DD Canada on November 26, 2011, 06:22:39 am

Hello,

That's a nice one, doomlord, the basic format is close to mine, but you've even more options and other tweaks, that could be for better or worse, I don't know, but I like the "comeback" of doom lord. :)

Not that close really.This took me over an hour to complete the format. And yeh, I will come back.

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: Blackdoom59 on November 26, 2011, 06:29:31 am

Epic dude , but  ? ? ? is not Fradz's inner voice ,he's somebody else(Change that plz)

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: Doomlord on November 26, 2011, 06:34:55 am

Quote from: Blackdoom59 on November 26, 2011, 06:29:31 am

Epic dude , but  ? ? ? is not Fradz's inner voice ,he's somebody else(Change that plz)

I know who that guy is. But this is chapter 6, don't spoil details. Just put that guy as a mysterious voice or inner voice is enough.

Title: 2nd Entry
Post by: Blackdoom59 on November 26, 2011, 07:05:38 am

                                                        The fallen ruler


Phodom & Fradz enter the area - Cutscene

P:Hmm...
F:What's it?
P:Can't you smell?The stink of death ...is all @ Kar'gath , but not here...
F:Well , they followed my advice and cleaned this place up!
P:Fradz ...No man walked in this place for such a long time..
*A wisp appears in front of Phodom and Fradz*
W:Weclome , gladiotors!
P:We are dr..
W:You shall fight for me , the ruler of Kar'gath , in an epic adventure all @ it!
F:Say what?
W:Wait , you are not my citizens!You are not rezidents!
P:No , we are....visitors.
W:Then , you shall die

The wisp has  a low ammount of hp , a good amount of mp and no dmg , but it casts fire spells
When wisp dies- CInematic

F:Easy...
P:Now what?
F:Room 2!
*P and F enter room 2 , a wisp appears next to them*
W:Welcome gladiotors!
P:This feels odd...
W:You shall fight for me , the ruler of Kar'gath , in an epic adventure all @ it!
P:No , we won't!
W:Yes you will!Eighterway , you shall face me!
F:Oh , God...

After 2nd wisp dies

P:Next area
*Next area , new wisp*
F:NOT AGAIN!
W:Welcome gladiators!
P:Well meet , mighty ruler!
F:What?
W:You shall fight for me , the ruler of Kar'gath , in an epic adventure all @ it!
P:True  , mighty ruler
F:WHAT?
P(Whisper):Fradz , do like me...
W:Huh?Whisper...No whispers allowed , you shall face me!
P:Fradz!
F:Sorry!

*Next area*

W:Welcome , gladiators!
P:Well met , ruler!
W:You shall fight for me , the ruler of Kar'gath , in an epic adventure all @ it!
P:Yes sir!
*The wisp teleports , then some other wisps show up ( low wisps) attacking the heroes*
If a wisp dies ,  a rune is summoned ,there are 30 wisps in total , 30 runes.
After our players aquire all the runes...
W:Good work , gladiators!But there is no other way , if you don't fight yourselfs , you shall be both executed!
F:Oh yes , mighty ruler!
P:No , we won't!
W:Verry well...
F:What'cha doin'?
P:Wait...
W:EXECUTIONERS!!!
P:Wait..
W:Were are theese..
W:Oh..Oh no , I remember , I have been defeated by that sorcer...
P:Everyone has it's time...
W:Yet still , I am a wisp ...I require power , give me your power , so I can reborn!


Interactive choice
A-Kill the wisp

P:You don't deserve power for what you have done to us!
*Phodom kills the wisp , both him and fradz get teleported to the begaining*
P:That was all , Fradz...
W:Welcome , gladiators!
P:Oh no...(so the quest restarts)

B-Give power to the wisp

P:Here , all of our mana points!
F:F*ck!
W:I need more , kill 20 wisps!


20 wisps randomly spawn , having the big wisp helping them , Phodom and Fradz must kill the wisps without spells.After that-Cinematic

*W turns into a lich-like rezident*
W:Thank you heroes!Soon , I will start the rebelion against this power, and I will turn Kar'gath into a peacefull fortress once more!
P:Let us see...
*The heroes along W are moving to the first city inside Kar'gath*
W:I will prepare the army now , you deserve a reward - take this(W gives something to them)
P:We wish you luck , ruler.
F:Ass!

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: Blackdoom59 on November 26, 2011, 07:07:06 am

Quote from: doomlord on November 26, 2011, 06:34:55 am

Quote from: Blackdoom59 on November 26, 2011, 06:29:31 am

Epic dude , but  ? ? ? is not Fradz's inner voice ,he's somebody else(Change that plz)

I know who that guy is. But this is chapter 6, don't spoil details. Just put that guy as a mysterious voice or inner voice is enough.

Yeah..So deleate (Frad'z inner voice) from your posts , and let it be only ? ? ?

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: Doomlord on November 26, 2011, 07:19:46 am

Quote from: Blackdoom59 on November 26, 2011, 07:07:06 am

Quote from: doomlord on November 26, 2011, 06:34:55 am

Quote from: Blackdoom59 on November 26, 2011, 06:29:31 am

Epic dude , but  ? ? ? is not Fradz's inner voice ,he's somebody else(Change that plz)

I know who that guy is. But this is chapter 6, don't spoil details. Just put that guy as a mysterious voice or inner voice is enough.

Yeah..So deleate (Frad'z inner voice) from your posts , and let it be only ? ? ?

Fine. I did it. But I still left one to avoid confusion.

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: Blackdoom59 on November 26, 2011, 07:30:15 am

F*ck , deleate that one 2 :((

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: Doomlord on November 26, 2011, 07:39:29 am

I did as you asked. But seriouly man, why do you have to pick a fight with the "inner voice" thing ?

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: /=FoX=/-Eragon on November 26, 2011, 08:04:24 am

Hello,

Quote from: doomlord on November 26, 2011, 06:28:25 am

Not that close really.This took me over an hour to complete the format. And yeh, I will come back.

Well, in fact the head titles and normal titles, as an example, do relate quite closely to mine. But that's not the majority I wished to speak of, it was merely a sidenote, and as I said I like the comeback situation.

@Black's 2nd entry, stop the madness, it's a lot better compared to 1st entry, and it certainly is annoying, provoking and all that kind of stuff, giving the "oh my goodness" -feeling. :D

Hmm... "A lich-like resident" that wants peace... Next time someone doubts if dragons could be peaceful, I'll be to present them this, because a lich being peaceful is of a even lower chance.

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: Blackdoom59 on November 26, 2011, 08:55:55 am

Peace rocks

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: /=FoX=/-Eragon on December 02, 2011, 02:23:26 pm

Hello,

So the deadline has expired...

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: Blackdoom59 on December 02, 2011, 03:52:37 pm

Quote from: DD Canada on December 02, 2011, 02:23:26 pm

Hello,

So the deadline has expired...

Aero should name the winner soon:D

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: Aeroblyctos on December 08, 2011, 04:19:34 am

I don't know what you guys are thinking but these entries definitely aren't puzzles. I just see some cinematic dialogues and bosses. Puzzles are about solving a problem and you need some brains to solve the problem not just killing some bosses.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Puzzle (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Puzzle)

I don't say the bosses or the dialogues are badly done. I may even use them.

I'll extend the competition by one more weeks until we get at least two puzzles. Also I've improved the hint section(original post).

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: /=FoX=/-Eragon on December 08, 2011, 08:39:09 am

Hello,

Couldn't we replace them with minigames? Or do I confuse to a different competition?
Either way; Rage, everything got rejected!

...Did the "idea can be taken from other games, but please tweak it as your own" hint just appear out-of-nowhere? Or was it a rule?

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: Blackdoom59 on December 08, 2011, 09:19:39 am

Kk , you want puzzles , I give you puzzles :D.

So my ideea is - Nightmare recipe puzzle

The 2 heroes enter the area , there is one resident(he is sleeping).CINEMATIC


F:Let's wake him up!
P:Why should we?
F:Let's just do it!
P:You do it...residents are sometimes harsh.
F:Okey , I'l go scare him!
*Fradz screams*
P:Ouch ... that hurts...
F:He's still asleep.
P:Let's just leave him...
F:Let's not!Go , go lightning!
*Lightning bolt near the resident*
F:This guy must be tired as hell!
P:Yeah...how to wake up a tired guy?
F:Give him nightmares!
P:You can't "give" nightmares...
F:Of course ... One resident told me once that there is a recipe for nightmares ...All we need is:"A dead frog , an axe of a fallen executioner and 30 resident robes.

NR1-A DEAD FROG
A blessed frog comes in the area.There are 1 Light Guardian and 1 Light Priest near the frog.Now what to do-The light guardian has armor aura(+500) , The light priest has an epic heal(low cd , full healed).The frog has only X hp  alone , but it has a +250 attack aura  and +50 AS aura , while the guardians both have only 1(the frog also) dmg and avrenge attack speed.Th

HOW TO BEAT
The player must find out that everytime the Light Priest  heals 2 things happen:
1.The armor aura decreases(for x seconds , not forever)
2.The frogs casts a 15% freezy(stackable).
The player must find out that everytime the Light Guardian is beeing attacked 2 things happen:
1.The armor aura increases(for x seconds , not forever)
2.The frog is stunned for 1 second
The player must find out that everytime the Frog attacks 1 thing happen
1.Phodom recives 10 bonus armor and Fradz 100 bonus dmg(preety imba , yes)

So basicaly , the player have to let himself attacked by the frog as much as he can.Also he must make the light priest heal as much as posible , and the player must not kill the healer , because no heal=>no - armor.The player must NOT attack the  Light guardian , because it will stun the frog and it will increase the armor.

NOTICE:Both guardians have spell resistence ,so they can't be healed ,nor targeted by spells.Also the frog must not be slowed/stunned/silenced , because the combo will get ruined.


After the frog dies , next ingredient

NR2-THE AXE OF A FALLEN EXECUTIONER
An executioner busts inside the labirinth , and he keeps patroling with his imba dmg and taunt ability.

HOW TO BEAT
The player must find out that you can click the "dead frog" item to actually summon a that cursed frog , only with no aura , but a real huge AS and DMG.Also , the frog has imba HP , and a incinerate ability(everytime it attacks , the next attack will have bonus dmg)
NOTICE:The frog dies if it tries to get out of the labirinth.

The frogs last for 10 seconds , and while taunted , it can deal massive dmg to that executioner.The requied ammount of frogs should be like 5 , because the players must also try to outrun the
executioner.Also the call down for the summon frog ability is 60 seconds.


The executioner axe is an item , part of the Nightmare set(requied to beat the puzzle , also dead frog is a requied item).It deals +x dmg and wind axe ability.

Wind axe-The user trows the axe into the air.After 10 seconds , the axe will land on the same spot as send , dealing some dmg(enaught to kill...a resident)

NR3-30 Resident robes-Cinematic

F:Only 30 resident robes left.
*30 residents are teleporting inside the area , each one beeing neutral*
P:We can't kill them...The rest of Kar'gath will kill us.
F:Hmm...Hmm.hmm

The player can still summon that frog.This time , the frog will make the residents mad.The residents will attack the frog.Someoune should trow executioners axe into the air 30 times , the best way to kill residents.But the residents are moving after EACH attack they do.

How to beat
The residents are moving into an order.The player must find the order and the perfect spot to launch the axe.
NOTICE:If the residents  are not attacking the frog , they are invulnearble.

Nightmare puzzle done when Nightmare set is complete.Nightmare set has only the ability nightmare.IF nightmare is cast on an enemy , nothing happens.If cast on the sleeping resident - Cinematic

R:AAAAAAAAAAAH
F:At least he woke up!
R:You really scared me!
F:I scared the sh*t out of you!
P:Fradz!I'm sorry , he wanted to wake you up so badly...
R:Actually, I'm glad he did.You see..I have been cursed to sleep forever.But he woke me up.Now here's your reward mr.Fradz
F:Mister?Oh no...

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: Aeroblyctos on December 08, 2011, 09:38:36 am

Quote from: DD Canada on December 08, 2011, 08:39:09 am

Hello,

Couldn't we replace them with minigames? Or do I confuse to a different competition?
Either way; Rage, everything got rejected!

...Did the "idea can be taken from other games, but please tweak it as your own" hint just appear out-of-nowhere? Or was it a rule?

Yea it was before mini-game and puzzle but then I changed just to puzzle.

That's just a hint. As you have probably seen I have too used ideas from other games.

Okay good Black, but the presentation is a little bit hard to read and understand. Also the idea is basically pretty simple but you have made it hard to undertand... '

And that dialogue in the end, "just what the ****".  ;D

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: Blackdoom59 on December 10, 2011, 05:54:40 am

Erm....DD , where did you got all those titles?
Ex:
Confronting the 'Deaths from Above'
or
The Life Afterwards

Preety imba tought :P

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: Aeroblyctos on December 12, 2011, 02:32:16 pm

So far we have two entries. Maybe one more and we're ready to move forward?

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: Blackdoom59 on December 13, 2011, 10:15:01 am

What about 2 enries >:)



                                                      Spirints's Revenge


Phodom and Fradz are entering the Area
P:I'm starting to have a bad feeling about this place...how about you Fradz?
F:Hmm...
P:?
F:Hmm...
P:What is it?
F:Hmm...
P:What are you doing?
F:AHA!!!
*Fradz spins his swords , an invisible ghost reveales near him , that ghost is pushed back , and turns invisible again*
P:What!?Who's there!
F:A ghost!
P:Ghots?This place was creepy enaught without ghosts!
F:No , Phodom.This is a special part of Kar'gath.This is where the last piece of human  resistence tried to defend the last room of Kar'gath , before it was overrun by the undeath.
P:How do you know this?
F:A resident tell me ...actualy the rebellion leader did ...
P:Then we should get out of here?
F:No...You see ...these ghosts are actualy fiery ghosts , while binding to the vulcano of Kar'gath.They are immune to most of your spells , and mine are not making more then pushing them back.
P:*slams the ground* Damn!What can we do then?
F:Heh , these burning asses are not invincible tought ,... you see , there are levers scatered all @ this labyrinth.I think there are 10 levers.Everyone of them will start opening the big door over there(F points to a door).There lies the leader of these ghosts.
P:Ah...
F:I will cover your back againts these ghosts , remember they all are invisible.You musn't attack them , for they fell nothing of normal attacks , nor fire spells.Also you shouldn't let yourself attacked too much.

                                                  Part 2-The way to the levers
There are levers scatered all @ the area , But they have a PERFECT order.If you missed the order , they will all restart so you have to start all over again.Also the ghost have epic attack speed and incinerate attack.The ghost are taking 0% dmg from normal attacks , 0% from fire spells , and 30% from lightning spells(lightning spells also stun for 4 seconds bonus each).There are ghost everywhere , even their MS is verry slow.After all of the levers are pushed , the door opens



                                                    Part 3-John's revenge
A random looking HUMAN viliager bursts out from the area.
J:Remember me?
F:Huh?
P:Ohh no!Not you again!
F:Who's this ass?
P:He's that invi-
J:I am the leader of ghosts now , you can do absolutely nothing to stop me, I will have my revenge ...and my ultimate love
*All the ghosts are coming near John*
P:DAMN!
F:I can't understand...
P:Fire....YES!Fire cannot resist watter !Fradz!
F:Huh?
P:QUick!Go to the resident city and bring me watter!
F:On my way!
J:Your rienforcements are not going to help you!
F:Back!
J:Fast...but stupid.
F:Here's your watter
J:NOO!You will pay for this Phodom!
P:Sure sure *Splash*
                                    The end

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: Blackdoom59 on December 13, 2011, 10:50:14 am

I'm not expecting my posts to be "perfect".Mainly because I am not a perfectionist.I am , however , expecting them to be understandable , and I do belive they are , since so many ppl (including you)are capable of understanding/reading them.

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: /=FoX=/-Eragon on December 13, 2011, 11:04:05 am

Hello,

And I'm not expecting it either (although it would certainly be pleasing) on normal posts, but these are presentations, a sort-of pitches. Their nature is to be informative, convincing and most of all, based on the codex: As few typos and other grammar errors as possible.

Sure, we could go 'n' live without these rules, but oh what kind of a degeneration of mankind it would be. :)

No more venturing in the space, NASA!

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: Blackdoom59 on December 13, 2011, 11:51:22 am

Quote from: DD Canada on December 13, 2011, 11:04:05 am

Hello,

And I'm not expecting it either (although it would certainly be pleasing) on normal posts, but these are presentations, a sort-of pitches. Their nature is to be informative, convincing and most of all, based on the codex: As few typos and other grammar errors as possible.

Sure, we could go 'n' live without these rules, but oh what kind of a degeneration of mankind it would be. :)

No more venturing in the space, NASA!

I NEVER was a perfectionist.I am too lazy to be something like that.Anywayz , if ppl are realy intressted in something , they will go past the aspect into the middle of the whole thing.

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: Blackdoom59 on December 14, 2011, 02:39:14 pm

Agreeing with DD.You said you are reviewing competitions at school.There were several times before  :o

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: Aeroblyctos on December 27, 2011, 07:32:55 am

So now we have two entries from Blackdoom59. Is this too hard competition?

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: /=FoX=/-Eragon on December 27, 2011, 07:38:51 am

Hello,

Quote from: Aeroblyctos on December 27, 2011, 07:32:55 am

So now we have two entries from Blackdoom59. Is this too hard competition?

No, it's just a dead one.

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: Blackdoom59 on December 27, 2011, 08:07:25 am

Just make me the winner and close this thread  ;)

Title: Re: Competition #33
Post by: Aeroblyctos on February 19, 2012, 12:36:07 pm

I hereby declare Blackdoom59 as the winner of the competition.