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Title: Floating texts for chapter 7
Post by: Aeroblyctos on May 25, 2011, 12:58:38 pm
Hello.

I'm once again searching for help. This time I need some floating texts for chapter 7. Also check out my grammar, I don't want any spelling errors.

The texts can be like anything but not TOOOOOOOOOOO random and not TOOOOOOOOOOOO long.


Entrance

- A guard's job is boring. I've been thinking about becoming a merchant.
- Terdoom Castle is gigantic in it's size.
- I think I've heard something about dragons... I've got a bad feeling about this.
- This is the entrance to the glorious Terdoom Castle!
- We've received new orders not to let anymore citizens in.
- An order was given to delay the rest of the guests.
- I've heard a command that the magical domes will be activated again.
- Are the dragons... Still alive!?
- It's been a tough day, first the guest inspection and now this.


Main roads/districts and parks

- I'm proud to walk on these glorious streets!
- This city is remarkable!
- Thousands and thousands of people live in this city today, and more is coming every day!
- The city is expanding so fast, it has already grown far from the original walls.
- This city has many parks that makes the atmosphere more relaxing.
- There are many Summoning Circles around Oelivert. The Magic Guild uses them for some sort of purpose.
- Did you know that the trolls are dragon worshipers?
- I think the dragons were always overrated.
- I remember that face... Fradz... You made my girl pregnant and left
- Libraries can hold ancient history. But I heard almost all of them were burned in the war.
- I've always wondered... Why did the war start in the first place? Did we fight for nothing?
- I heard the dragons are back... But the king told us they're all dead.
- I want to be a wanderer. Everyday I help people and defeat monsters.
- I never get to go adventuring because me mum won't let me!
- Terdoom Castle is just too big. I always get myself lost in here!
- My dream is to work in the castle serving the king someday.
- Terdoom Castle is the safest place in the world!
- I was wondering why our world's name is Oelivert.
- I think the infrastructure in here is too boring. Everything is just so plain.
- This city is just too huge!
- I wonder how many people live in here. Everyday more and more people move here.
- The road is wide, maybe a little too wide.

Magic Research

- I heard the trolls around the Icy Mountains are having some huge problems.
- There are many mysterious powers in this world yet to be found.
- We humans have some interesting powers that we don't know much about.
- I wonder what's the source of magic?
- The dragons clearly are the most powerful when it comes to magic.
- Many answers would have been answered a long time ago if we would have cooperation with the dragons.

Magic Guild

- Orcs are so keen on magic just like us. That's why we share many projects together.
- Our biggest project is to create the enormous Teleportation System.
- Summoning Circles were used in the war against the dragons.
- It is said that the most powerful fighters come from Northern tribes... Just like Xanothin.
- Magic Guild is the biggest guild in the whole world!
- This guild has no boundaries, we're everywhere!

Army Quarters

- Welcome to the Army Quarters!
- This is one of many Army Quarters in the city. Welcome!
- We still have a strong military after the war.
- If you are strong and dedicated enough, you can be promoted from the army to a dragon slayer!
- Did you know that most of the dragon slayers comes from the army?
- The world is filled with magic... I don't trust magic.
- Phodom, may the hammer be with you always!
- Phodom, it's been a long time. I still remember your excellent leadership!
- Life and death is unpredictable. Destiny is the only thing I believe in.
- Stay on your business.
- My dream is to become a dragon slayer. I've been training hard to become one.

Market Areas

- There are so many interesting items that I pissed in my pants.
- I wish I had more money.
- Did you know that the trolls are the second largest race after humans by population?
- Your items are indeed powerful, but I've seen even more powerful items.
- Some dragons have been seen... I must prepare myself for a second conflict!
- I really hate this city... Too big for my taste!
- There are many games to be played here.
- Gladiator Arena? Wow, that's a scary place.
- I've heard that you can see the creator when you drink enough sludge.
- I'm a merchant and I've been doing a lot business with Kar'Gath.
- The business here is great.
- I'm searching for some nice swords and axes.
Title: Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
Post by: Pourquoi on May 25, 2011, 10:58:43 pm
Grammar mistakes:
Quote
- There are many Summoning Circles around the Oelivert. Magic Guild uses them for something.
Should be: '- There are many Summoning Circles around the Oelivert. The Magic Guild uses them for some sort of purpose.'
Quote
- Did you know that the trolls are dragon worshipers?
Should be: '- Did you know that the trolls are dragon worshippers?'
Quote
- The world is filled with thousands of starts. But you can always clearly see 2 and the sun.
You mean 'stars'?
Quote
- Orcs are so keen to magic just like us. That's why we share many projects together.
Should be: '- Orcs are so keen on magic just like us. That's why we share many projects together.'
Quote
- Welcome to Army Quarters!
Should be: '- Welcome to the Army Quarters!'
Title: Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
Post by: Aeroblyctos on May 26, 2011, 09:54:40 am
Thanks!

Fixed.
Title: Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
Post by: pl4ton on May 28, 2011, 09:08:11 pm
dont be so shy!

Some guys on the street should say:

- I wonder who was our creator?

-(pretty girl) If I only could meet Aero *sigh*

- Dragons are overrated anyway, what about Zergs?

-Anyone seen my drIgonPAD?

- (some priest) I cant really answer your questions how our world was created... infact I dont know nothing (kills himself cause of deep depression afterwards)

-some random girl to Fradz: Fradz im pregnant!

-some random old women to Galeoth: Galeoth, search my library - there are some secrets you never could dream off! ;)

-random guy: you cant be Dragon Slayers, your equipment sucks

-other guy: check tcocamgaign.com for help!


-random guy: Phodom may your Hammer be with you!


 ;D ::) :P


Title: Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
Post by: Aeroblyctos on May 29, 2011, 03:20:56 am
Thanks, I added some. They're not exactly like yours but the idea behind them is yours.

More, more, more!
Title: Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
Post by: Pourquoi on May 29, 2011, 06:50:47 am
Some random guy: 'I'm trying to think up a good adventurer name, for when I become an adventurer, which I will one of these days! Uh, anyway, I'm thinking of maybe calling myself 'Amiable Dingo'? Has a nice ring to it, don't you think?'
Title: Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
Post by: Aeroblyctos on May 29, 2011, 07:03:53 am
That's too long. Cut it to half and then it's okay I guess.
Title: Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
Post by: Tears on May 29, 2011, 07:16:03 am
This is what I want for my life: "I want to be a wanderer. Everyday I help people and defeat monsters."
and then "Life and death is unpredictable. Destiny is the only thing I believe in".






"
Title: Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
Post by: Aeroblyctos on May 29, 2011, 08:40:15 am
Good ones. Thanks.
Title: Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
Post by: Pourquoi on May 30, 2011, 12:36:45 am
Greeeetings here, Phodom!
This is the Army Quarters!
You're welcome here!
Title: Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
Post by: Aeroblyctos on May 30, 2011, 12:11:35 pm
Great.

More.
Title: Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
Post by: Tears on June 04, 2011, 08:42:01 am
A JOKE: two guys are chatting:

A: Do you know that Fable III has just been released?
B: Oh, I played the demo, it sucks!
A: How about The Witcher II, it's released in the same week?
B: Oh, it's great but I'm not in the mood.
A: Why? Too many... ehem.... adults scenes?
B: No, that's not the reason.
A: Then what?
B: I'm just waiting for The Chosen One.
A: In that case.. Can I borrow your computer?
B: Why don't use yours?
A: Mine is just not strong enough to play those games.
B: No way.
A: Why?
B: BECAUSE MY PLAYER WANT TO PLAY THE CHOSEN ONE, NOT WATCH YOU PLAY YOUR GAMES!
Title: Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
Post by: Pourquoi on June 04, 2011, 08:54:50 am
What about:
'My weight already
went all the way up in like
the blink of an eye'?
Or
''I never get to go adventuring because me mum won't let me!'
Title: Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
Post by: Aeroblyctos on June 04, 2011, 09:18:47 am
Quote from: Tears on June 04, 2011, 08:42:01 am
A JOKE: two guys are chatting:

A: Do you know that Fable III has just been released?
B: Oh, I played the demo, it sucks!
A: How about The Witcher II, it's released in the same week?
B: Oh, it's great but I'm not in the mood.
A: Why? Too many... ehem.... adults scenes?
B: No, that's not the reason.
A: Then what?
B: I'm just waiting for The Chosen One.
A: In that case.. Can I borrow your computer?
B: Why don't use yours?
A: Mine is just not strong enough to play those games.
B: No way.
A: Why?
B: BECAUSE MY PLAYER WANT TO PLAY THE CHOSEN ONE, NOT WATCH YOU PLAY YOUR GAMES!

Spoiler (hover to show)

I... Really... Don't... Know... What... To... Say...!


UPDATED!
Title: Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
Post by: Aeroblyctos on June 24, 2011, 07:32:44 am
Let's go serious if we ever want to finish this request. I'll finish the floating texts within one week and will do a lot of them when I travel back to home(next Monday). In the mean time give me your ideas for floating texts.
Title: Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
Post by: legolas638 on June 29, 2011, 01:13:40 pm
Quote
- Guard's job is boring. I've been thiking to become a merchant.
It should be thinking not"thiking"
Title: Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
Post by: Aeroblyctos on June 29, 2011, 02:36:29 pm
Yeah, fixed.

I also put some more. I've feeling we're almost finished here.

Now someone quickly check and fix if needed. Then I'll add them to the campaign. Thanks!
Title: Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
Post by: legolas638 on June 29, 2011, 04:14:47 pm
Quote
I've heard if you drink enough sludge you can see the creator.
I've heard that you can see the creator when you drink enough sludge.
I think this one will be better.
Title: Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
Post by: Aeroblyctos on June 30, 2011, 04:07:55 am
Okay. Anything else?
Title: Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
Post by: Killa on June 30, 2011, 11:12:35 am
Quite a bit more mistakes than I thought, I'd think some people would pick up on some of these but I can expect that, I'm OCD when it comes to English so that's why I notice so many of these, haha. Anyhow, all the sentences left in were wrong and are now in their corrected version. I think this batch of floating texts is all correct now. Of course, anyone is free to double check me, I sometimes make mistakes.

Entrance

- A guard's job is boring. I've been thinking about becoming a merchant.
- Terdoom Castle is gigantic in it's size.
- I think I've heard something about dragons... I've got a bad feeling about this.
- This is the entrance to the glorious Terdoom Castle!
- An order was given to delay the rest of the guests.

Main roads/districts and parks

- Thousands and thousands of people live in this city today, and more is coming every day!
- This city has many parks that makes the atmosphere more relaxing.
- There are many Summoning Circles around Oelivert. The Magic Guild uses them for some sort of purpose.
- I've always wondered... Why did the war start in the first place? Did we fight for nothing?
- Terdoom Castle is just too big. I always get myself lost in here!

Magic Research

- I heard the trolls around the Icy Mountains are having some huge problems.
- There are many mysterious powers in this world yet to be found.
- The sky is filled with thousands of stars. But if you look close you can see two stars and the Sun.
- Many answers would have been answered a long time ago if we would have cooperation with the dragons.

Magic Guild

- It is said that the most powerful fighters come from Northern tribes... Just like Xanothin.

Army Quarters

- If you are strong and dedicated enough, you can be promoted from the army to a dragon slayer!

Market Areas

- There are so many interesting items that I pissed in my pants.
- There are many games to be played here.
- I'm searching for some nice swords and axes.
Title: Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
Post by: Aeroblyctos on July 04, 2011, 08:43:06 am
Thanks man.

Now I put everything to the campaign.
Title: Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
Post by: Pourquoi on July 04, 2011, 09:30:32 pm
What about:
'I know it's a trite old question by now, but what's your favourite lobe of a trilobite?'
'Modern RPGs are just all about grinding, anyway, and I can't stand it.'
'Where is the honour in defeating others without a real cause? I don't believe in strength for the sake of strength.'
'This pool of water would be great for swimming to get away from the scorching heat! Too bad you can't swim in this game, and neither can I!'
'The city is full of merchants. You may have to shop around a bit to find the best wares, but beware; some merchants can't be trusted!'
'Why do we have to work ALL the time? It's not fair! We should just get paid even if we don't work! I don't like *earning* money! I just want it! Want want want! Waaah!'
'This armour makes me look really *fat*, which is funny because fat is exactly what I'm not!'
'This world is weak. Weak worlds are craving to be destroyed. Simply craving. I am merely doing a service to the universe by ridding it of this rubbish. Tidying up.'
Title: Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
Post by: Aeroblyctos on July 07, 2011, 09:05:46 am
Okay thanks but I felt like half of your texts doesn't really fit.  :o
Title: Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
Post by: Aeroblyctos on July 08, 2011, 06:08:53 am
Actually I still need more texts. I run out of texts and my mind is empty now.

These kind of areas are still lacking text:

- Auction Hall
- Army Quarters
- Few Parks
- Zoo
- Church Areas
- Graveyard
Title: Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
Post by: Pourquoi on July 08, 2011, 07:28:19 am
Park:
Quote
This pool of water would be great for swimming to get away from the scorching heat! Too bad you can't swim in this game, and neither can I!
Quote
I wish people threw money into this fountain so then I could nick it.
Quote
Facial hair is disgusting. Not appealing at all.
Quote
Tharo-kun's soo kawaii~~~! Desu.
Auction Hall:
Quote
MUMMY CAN I HAVE SOMETHING TO EAT CAN I MUMMY HUH HUH MUMMY WHY AREN'T YOU PAYING ATTENTION TO ME MUMMY MUMMY MUMMY MUMMY MUMMY I WANT SOMETHING TO EAT CAN I GO TO THE TOILET?!?!
Quote
Ugh. I hate having a family. I hate it so much. I can't even kill them to be rid of the pain and torture. Maybe I can just sell them off as slaves here. If they even DO that sort of thing.
Army Quarters:
Quote
Where is the honour in defeating others without a real cause? I don't believe in strength for the sake of strength.
Quote
This armour makes me look really *fat*, which is funny because fat is exactly what I'm not!
Quote
I came all the way here to deliver something to the King, but I'm not even allowed into the palace for some reason!
Quote
You know *I'm* against unnecessary bloodshed...
Quote
Evil people do need to be brought to justice, but by just slaughtering them mercilessly, we're no better than they are.
Quote
Well, I'd only kill a guy if he killed me first!
Quote
I'm not really injured, y'know. Just lazy. But don't tell anone, or I'll rip yer bleedin' 'ead off wi' me bare hands, yer cretin!
Church:
Quote
Gods... I hate 'em! I've been devoting my life to this [PROFANITY]in' Xyrzious deity, and what he has done for me? But anyway, I recommend that you really should visit the church, guys! Xyrzious is a truly wonderful deity who you really should worship and donate your money to!
Quote
All Hail Xyrzious! That's what we devoted priests say to greet people. And all the time, during many situations. Like during the climax of copulation. Not that we do that, since we're priests and all.
Quote
I will pay none of my vast riches to any blasted gods! Why, Xyrzious should be paying ME tithes!
Quote
This man hasn't paid his monthly tithe to the Church. Tsk, people like this will regret their greed in their next lives, I tell you...
Graveyard:
Quote
If you try to desecrate the graves, I will kill you ten times before you hit the ground, devil.
Quote
Watching this flame burns reminds me of my life... Hot, yellow, flickering, constant yet chaotic within boundaries, and dull as hell.
Quote
I'm a Necromancer, yeeees, yeeees! I'll necromance you, Galeoth, you... you festering blightering blightery... blighter, with your... your.... yeeeeees... your robe, your robe...
Quote
Gods, I'm depressed.
Quote
I despise the sun. It gives me nightmares.
Market:
Quote
Your clothes are sickeningly ugly! You need to buy some of my trendier armours so then people don't throw rocks at you for looking so ridiculous, even though your appearance would look the same whatever you've equipped!
Quote
Would you like to purchase some instruments of death? I'm not surprised, what with you being barbaric savages and all!
Quote
I sleep on bags o' money at night! Myep.
Quote
You see, mathematically, since I have no hair, and dividing by zero results in infinity, it shall take an infinite amount of time to wash my hair.
What do you think?
Title: Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
Post by: Aeroblyctos on July 13, 2011, 08:04:05 am
Okay, THANKS!

Now all floating texts are done.

Once again, thanks to EVERYONE who helped me with the case!  ;)