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Title: Item Description Help
Post by: Aeroblyctos on March 19, 2011, 06:23:37 am

Hey.

I'm searching for someone who has a lot of patience and free time to help me to update the item description. The job is pretty easy, but it needs at least average English skills(better than mine) to fix possible grammar errors.

The job is to convert old item descriptions to new ones. I'll do the synthesis items myself, but I'm asking you to do all basic items and item sets. The job will take a lot of time depending how fast you are. This is not just one night thing. But hey, I've been doing this campaign like 3 years or something.

There are two different type old description. "Old" and "very old".

Here's an example of old converting:

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OLD:

|c00FEBA0E+150 to |cff3C3CFFMana|r
|c00FEBA0E+5 |cffFF0000Strength|r
|c00FEBA0E+5 |cff00FF00Agility|r
|c00FEBA0E+5 |cff3C3CFFIntellect|r
|cff6495edOccasionally summons an elemental golem with 500 hit points to help the wielder.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare
|c00FEBA0EClassification: |c0020C000Jewel
|c00FEBA0EStory: |c0020C000-|c00FEBA0E.|r

NEW:

|c00FEBA0E+150 Mana
+5 All Stats
|cff6495edOccasionally summons an elemental golem with 500 hit points to help the wielder.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare

...If there are all three stats then you can simply put "+All Stats". Saves a lot of space.

Here's an example of very old converting:

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VERY OLD:

Increases the attack damage of the Hero by 15 when worn. Also, the basic attacks deal an additional 2% of wielder's max Mana in damage. |c00FEBA0E|nQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare|c00FEBA0E. |nClassification: |c0020C000Item Set (1/6)|c00FEBA0E. |nStory: |c0020C000-|c00FEBA0E.|r

NEW:

|c00FEBA0E+15 Damage
|cff6495edAlso, the basic attacks deal an additional 2% of wielder's max Mana in damage.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare
|c00FEBA0EItem Set: 1/2

...Also the special text could need some improvements...
...Item sets always have that "|c00FEBA0EItem Set: X/X"...

You'll need this list to do things:

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Armor
All Stats
Strength
Agility
Intellect
Health
Health Regen
Mana
Mana Regen
Damage
Magic Damage
Attack speed
Critical Damage
Steal Chance
Evasion
Experience
Gold
Vitality
Luck

|c00959697Normal
|c007EBFF1Rare
|c00FFFC01Unique
|c00FF8000Epic
|c00FF0303Legendary
|c008500CCMyth

Additional notes:

- All special things goes to same place. If it's possible and there are more than one special thing try to make one special thing in one sentence and another in second sentence.

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|c00FEBA0E+160 Damage
+25 All stats
|cff6495edEvery attack has a 25% chance to increase wielder's agility, intelligence and strength stats by 6 for 30 seconds. This effect can stack up to five times. Every 15th attack the sword heals the wielder by 1000 or deals 1000 damage to the attacked unit.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FF8000Epic

- Try to make special things very understanding and short as possible.
- Try to make descriptions easy to read and small.


If you want to help me, download the latest version of the campaign, open it by World Editor, go to:

=> Campaign screen => Custom Data  => Items

There are two categories which should be updated: Permanent and Miscellaneous. I'm talking about the "under categories", don't care about the upper categories they are "original items" from basic Warcraft 3 game.

I'll do Power Up myself which is Synthesis Items. Make your descriptions to a notepad or just simply put the text here. Remember to frequently give me your texts because I'll check if you are doing it correctly. It would be stupid to give me everything and then you must fix.

Please ask me anything about this request. I'm sure you'll be credited gloriously!

TEST MAP (http://tcocampaign.createaforum.com/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=452.0;attach=168)

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Pourquoi on March 19, 2011, 07:44:15 am

The 1st line in the Magic Orb's description is too vague.
"+X% critical damage". It increases the damage dealt by crits, right?
Anyway, here are some tooltips:
Maragath's Armor
|c00FEBA0E+4 Armor
+200 Health
+4 Strength
|nQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare.
|c00FEBA0EItem Set: 1/3.
Maragath's Amulet
|c00FEBA0E+3 Health Regen
+4 Strength
|nQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare.
|c00FEBA0EItem Set: 1/3.
Maragath's Belt
|c00FEBA0E+4 Strength
|cff6495ed25% chance to restore 20% of the Hero's max Health when he kills an enemy.
|nQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare.
|c00FEBA0EItem Set: 1/3.
Maragath's Set
|c00FEBA0E+4 Armor
+200 Health
+12 Strength
+3 Health Regen
|cff6495ed25% chance to heal the Hero by 20% of his max Health when he kills an enemy.
|nQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique.
|c00FEBA0EItem Set: 3/3.
Miraga's Staff
|c00FEBA0E+4 Intellect
|cff6495ed25% chance to restore 25% of the Hero's max Mana when he kills an enemy.
|nQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare.
|c00FEBA0EItem Set: 1/3.
Miraga's Armor
|c00FEBA0E+2 Armor
E+200 Mana
+4 Intellect
|nQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare.
|c00FEBA0EItem Set: 1/3.
Miraga's Ring
|c00FEBA0E+2 Mana Regen
+4 Intellect
|nQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare.
|c00FEBA0EItem Set: 1/3.
Miraga's Set
|c00FEBA0E+2 Armor
+2 Mana Regen
+12 Intellect
+200 Mana
|cff6495ed25% chance to restore 20% of the Hero's max Health when he kills an enemy.
|nQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique.
|c00FEBA0EItem Set: 3/3.

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Aeroblyctos on March 19, 2011, 11:49:37 am

Hey.

Yeah, crit dmg is Critical Damage.

You must exactly do things as I have given otherwise this won't work. We must go exactly as the formula says. You must put the right codes to there also.

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Pourquoi on March 19, 2011, 06:25:42 pm

OK, so... Please add the codes of the colour of each stat to the OP.

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Aeroblyctos on March 20, 2011, 03:11:27 am

Now we are moving forward, but still there are some problems.

1) You forgot "|c00FEBA0E" from the beginning.
2) You forgot "|cff6495ed" before the special thing.
3) You made things too hasty, and didn't check what quality it was. It wasn't "Rare", it was "Unique", meaning the color must be also changed.
4) Also if we go really accurate, I would put Intellect after Armor, so that "Mana Regen" and "Mana" are closer. It somehow looks to me more logical.

Your version:

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(http://tcocampaign.createaforum.com/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=452.0;attach=162;image)

My version:

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(http://tcocampaign.createaforum.com/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=452.0;attach=164;image)

This is very, very accurate job. Everything must be perfect. But once you get the idea, it goes really fast making these descriptions. I'm at the moment doing Synthesis Items. There things aren't so simple because they have really long descriptions and I'm remaking some and making some more.

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Pourquoi on March 20, 2011, 04:08:01 am

Quote

4) Also if we go really accurate, I would put Intellect after Armor, so that "Mana Regen" and "Mana" are closer. It somehow looks to me more logical.

Then you should rearrange the order of the stats in the OP exactly as you want. That makes things easier.

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Aeroblyctos on March 20, 2011, 06:58:33 am

Yeah, well. I'm sometimes too "perfectionist". I edited the original post and rearranged the list.

Heh...

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Armor
All Stats
Strength
Agility
Intellect
Health
Health Regen
Mana
Mana Regen
Damage
Magic Damage
Attack speed
Critical Damage
Steal Chance
Evasion
Experience
Gold
Vitality
Luck

No need to make Brother set, I just did it. I did it because it was needed for one Synthesis Item I remade(Life's Stone).

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First Brother

|c00FEBA0E+2 Armor
|cff6495edWhen attacked, the damage is reduced by 10 hit points. Every 10th attack against the wielder restores 300 hit points.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare
|c00FEBA0EItem Set: 1/4

Second Brother

|c00FEBA0E+2 Armor
|cff6495edWhen attacked, the damage is reduced by 10 hit points. Every 10th attack against the wielder restores 300 hit points.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare
|c00FEBA0EItem Set: 1/4


Third Brother

|c00FEBA0E+2 Armor
|cff6495edWhen attacked, the damage is reduced by 10 hit points. Every 10th attack against the wielder restores 300 hit points.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare
|c00FEBA0EItem Set: 1/4

Fourth Brother

|c00FEBA0E+2 Armor
|cff6495edWhen attacked, the damage is reduced by 10 hit points. Every 10th attack against the wielder restores 30 hit points.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare
|c00FEBA0EItem Set: 1/4

Legendary Murloc Head

|c00FEBA0E+8 Armor
|cff6495edWhen attacked, the damage is reduced by 40 hit points. Every 10th attack against the wielder restores 1200 hit points.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FF8000Epic
|c00FEBA0EItem Set: 4/4

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Pourquoi on March 20, 2011, 07:52:06 am

Now, for the next part...
Power Hammer
|c00FEBA0E+1 Damage per 2 charges (rounded up, up to a maximum of 300 bonus damage)
|cff6495edGains a charge when the Hero kills an enemy.
|nQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique.
Sword of Haste
|c00FEBA0E+1% Attack Speed per 3 charges (rounded up, up to a maximum of 100% bonus attack speed)
|cff6495edGains a charge when the Hero kills an enemy.
|nQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique.
Book of Regeneration
|c00FEBA0E+1% Health Regen and Mana Regen per 6 charges (rounded up, up to a maximum of 75% health and mana regen)
|cff6495edGains a charge when the Hero kills an enemy.
|nQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique.
Icy Crystal
|c00FEBA0E+1% Spell Damage per 3 charges (rounded up, up to a maximum of 100% bonus spell damage)
|cff6495edGains a charge when the Hero kills an enemy.
|nQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique.
Is that OK?

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Tears on March 20, 2011, 11:26:10 am

I can do this. I will take the Mis category (110 items). Everyday I will work at least 10 items. I wil give you a txt file for every 1 or 2 days.

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Aeroblyctos on March 20, 2011, 11:28:54 am

Quote from: Tears on March 20, 2011, 11:26:10 am

I can do this. I will take the Mis category (110 items). Everyday I will work at least 10 items. I wil give you a txt file for every 1 or 2 days.

Okay. Now you guys must decide. Who will do what? How much? Etc?

To Chimto:

Good, good.

There are some problems:

- Color coding is wrong
- There's a dot after quality and item set. There shouldn't be.

(http://tcocampaign.createaforum.com/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=452.0;attach=166;image)

I have also attached to the original post a link to map I use to test if the descriptions are fine. I occasionally test that if I'm doing correct job. I think you should do that too. I've been doing this whole day item descriptions.

EDIT: Hohoo, I just made first MYTH ITEM!

(http://tcocampaign.createaforum.com/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=452.0;attach=169;image)

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Tears on March 20, 2011, 03:25:20 pm

You should test this before I continue, I use a single map to test my description (fast loading time).
Here: http://www.mediafire.com/?3vbk6b523h95qa2 (http://www.mediafire.com/?3vbk6b523h95qa2)

There are 2 points I remade your items (just description, I'm dead dull with the editor).

1. Archeon Set.
The Archeon Hood give chance to increase 30 agi but the Set only give 25 agi. So I correct the Set to 30 agi.

2. Azeurus Set
With Azeurus Relic, this Set now has 6 parts instead of 5, so the Set should be +2000 Health and 1800 Mana instead of +1000 Health and 800 Mana.

If I was wrong, correct it for me.

NOTE: REPLY ME AS SOON AS POSSIBLE OR I WILL MAKE A LOT OF WRONG ITEMS DESCRIPTION.

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Aeroblyctos on March 20, 2011, 05:41:12 pm

Looks good, but:

- There are two spaces. Get rid of the spaces.
- Azureus Relic have some boring text. Remove it. There will not be any story from now on.
- In special texts, just put everything and no extra spaces. No need to separate specials with spaces. We have to remember there's a maximum amount of text in description we must not go over it. That is why we try to make descriptions small as possible.
- Good try with Animal Set special. However don't put that space again.

I fixed one description for an example:

Your:

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|c00FEBA0E+5 Armor
+12 Health Regen
+6 Mana Regen
+100 Damage
+1 Vitality

|cff6495edGive an aura that give nearby allies:
40% more experience enemies.
40% counter attack.

|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare
|c00FEBA0EItem Set (4/4)

Should be:

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|c00FEBA0E+5 Armor
+12 Health Regen
+6 Mana Regen
+100 Damage
+1 Vitality
|cff6495edGive an aura that give nearby allies 40% more experience and blallbalba...hhvha?ta?rtharhthtohaorvrvtr. hohoohoahoohhoho hiihihh. wshhwhwbahrwb.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare
|c00FEBA0EItem Set (4/4)

...Also the quality is wrong.
...And there's no space after "and".

Otherwise I'm satisfied.

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Tears on March 20, 2011, 10:39:53 pm

OK, I will fix those and then send you with next items.

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Tears on March 20, 2011, 10:54:25 pm

BTW, Chimto, I think you take the Pernament category or we will do the same job :)!

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Pourquoi on March 22, 2011, 09:09:01 am

Tears, I would want you to post the descriptions here, so that I won't accidentally do the description of an item you already made.
Scythe of Annihilation
|cff6495ed10% chance on attack to instantly kill any enemy whose level is equal to or lower than the Hero's level.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique
Anaho Relic
|c00FEBA0E+(INTx0.1) Mana Regen
|c00FEBA0E+200 Magic Damage
|c00FEBA0E+25% Experience
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique
The Aerial Set's description that you just made has some grammar problems in the special part. I fixed it for you:
The Hero is healed when he moves.
Every 15th attack either heals the Hero by 2000 health or deals 2000 damage.
Every attack has a 15% chance to increase all stats of the Hero by 12 for 30 seconds (can stack up to 5 times).
When the Hero is attacked, deals damage equal to INTx2 to the attacker.

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Aeroblyctos on March 22, 2011, 10:13:41 am

Scythe of Annihilation is fine I guess.

Your Anaho Relic descriptions isn't correct. You used too many times color codes. Also "(INTx0.1) Mana Regen" that is actually a special thing, not a basic bonus even if it looks like a normal bonus...

Thanks for fixing the description.

Hey this is REALLY unorganized. Give me at least 10 items per post. If you just give like few descriptions per post it takes longer for me to open the campaign than copying those texts to the campaign(but of course I have campaign open all the times... but you get the point).

EDIT: Heh, heh. I just made Sargatanas!

|c00FEBA0ERequired: |c00E55BB0Orichalcon, Qzoch's Set, Restoration Belt, Greater Magic Ball and Jade
|c00FEBA0E+300 Damage
+25% Attack Speed
+30% Critical Damage
+1500 Health
+1200 Mana
+50% Health Regen
+50% Mana Regen
|cff6495edEvery Attack restores 3% back of wielder's maximum health and mana. Every kill restores 50% of wielder's maximum health and mana.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FF0303Legendary

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Tears on March 22, 2011, 01:35:19 pm

I had already done with the Misc Items.
Here for you Aero: http://www.mediafire.com/?awh2x6qm9256baf (http://www.mediafire.com/?awh2x6qm9256baf)
If there are too many items you don't like the description just simply tell me, I wil try again, you just focus on your job.

@Chimto: if you need help just give me the tilte of the items you want me to do.

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Pourquoi on March 23, 2011, 12:52:47 am

Skull of Chaos
|cff6495ed10% chance on attack to reduce the attacked enemy's damage by 20% for 2 seconds.
When used, removes up to 10 charges from the Skull of Chaos, then deals damage equal to (number of charges removed+LVL)x10 and reduces armor of all enemies around the Hero equal to the number of charges removed for 10 seconds.
Gains a charge when the Hero kills an enemy.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique
Golden Claw
|c00FEBA0E+60 Damage
+25% Attack speed
+30% Experience
+30% Gold
|cff6495ed4% chance on attack to summon a Mummy. The Mummy gains 10% health and damage per 50 stats of the Hero. Lasts 30 seconds.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique
Holy Seal
|c00FEBA0E+500 Mana
+50% Mana Regen
+20% Magic Damage
+1 Luck
|cff6495edResurrects the Hero when he dies. Cooldown: 300 seconds.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique
Doom Sword
|c00FEBA0E+60 Damage
+14 Strength
|cff6495ed25% splash damage.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique
Necromancer Staff
|c00FEBA0E+15 Intellect
+250 Mana
+5 Mana Regen
+150 Magic Damage
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique
Dragon Amulet
|c00FEBA0E+25 Intellect
+25% Magic Damage
+1 Vitality
|cff6495edRestores mana of the Hero equal to INT when he casts a spell.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FF8000Epic

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Aeroblyctos on March 23, 2011, 03:28:53 pm

Quote from: Tears on March 22, 2011, 01:35:19 pm

I had already done with the Misc Items.
Here for you Aero: http://www.mediafire.com/?awh2x6qm9256baf (http://www.mediafire.com/?awh2x6qm9256baf)
If there are too many items you don't like the description just simply tell me, I wil try again, you just focus on your job.

@Chimto: if you need help just give me the tilte of the items you want me to do.

Excellent work, Tears. I don't see any mistakes. Perfect, simply perfect.

To Cimto: "25% splash damage." people might not understand the meaning of this. Can you please make it a little more accurate? I think that's made from cleaving attack(The Pit Lord strikes with such force that he damages multiple enemies with his attack. |n|n|cffffcc00Level 1|r - <ANca,DataA1,%>% damage is splash. |n|cffffcc00Level 2|r - <ANca,DataA2,%>% damage is splash. |n|cffffcc00Level 3|r - <ANca,DataA3,%>% damage is splash.)

Otherwise perfect also.

Also, can you combine all your texts to one place and then give it to me? I mean once everything is ready from your part. Then I'll put them all to the campaign same time.

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Tears on March 23, 2011, 11:02:09 pm

Ok, Now that I know I do things right, I continue helping speed up the progress with Chimto.

@Chimto:
I will do the items from bottom to top. But for your convenience, I will now post my description here. BTW, are you Vietnamese?

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Tears on March 24, 2011, 12:27:53 am

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===== Cursed Blade
|cff6495edAdd <AIcb,DataA1> bonus damage to the attack of a Hero when carried. The Hero's attacks also become ranged when attacking air and reduce the armor of enemy units for <AIcb,Dur1> seconds.

===== Spider Queen's Claw
|c00FEBA0E+30 Damage
+60 Magic Damage
|cff6495eddOccasionally summons an Icy Spider with 500 hit points to help the wielder.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare

===== Dragon Amulet
|c00FEBA0E+25 Intelligence
+25% Magic Damage
+1 Vitality
|cff6495edRestores(Intx1) mana when casting a spell.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FF8000Epic

===== Magical Book
|c00FEBA0E+1 Vitality
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare

===== Skeleton Cape
|c00FEBA0E+10 Agility
+300 Health
+5 Health Regen
+4% Evasion
+30% Steal Chance
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique

===== Staff of Tranquility
|c00FEBA0E+8 Health Regen
+4 Mana Regen
+20% Health Regen
+20% Mana Regen
+500 Magic Damage
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique

===== Destiny
|c00FEBA0E+5 All Stats
+30 Damage
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare

===== Portrait of Cygnus
|c00FEBA0E+1 Vitality
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare

===== Blue Binkie
|c00FEBA0E+1 Vitality
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare

===== Toxic Sting
|c00FEBA0E+10 Damage
+20% Critical Damage
|cff6495edSlows the attacked opponent by 20% and deals 30 damage per second for the following 30 seconds.
|c00FEBA0EQuality:  |c007EBFF1Rare

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===== Cuirass of Healing
|c00FEBA0E+6 Armor
+8 Health Regen
|cff6495edReduces damage taken by 10.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique

===== Death Spike
|cff6495ed20% chances to instantly kill any opponent of level (wielder's level/2) or under.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique

===== Killer's Armor
|c00FEBA0E+6 Armor
+20 Agility
+400 Health
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare

===== Centaur's Axe
|c00FEBA0E+12 Agility
+25 Damage
+10% Critical Damage
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare

===== Doom Helmet
|c00FEBA0E+12 Armor
+30 Strength
+1000 Health
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique

===== Drums of Glory
|c00FEBA0E+25% Gold
+25% Experience
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique

===== Magic Shackles
|c00FEBA0E+20 Intelligence
+400 Mana
+60 Damage
+10% Magic Damage
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique

===== Lucky Horseshoe
|c00FEBA0E+1 Luck
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique

===== Juggernaut Armor
|c00FEBA0E+8 Armor
+20 Strength
+1000 Health
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FF8000Epic

===== Tzitorin
|c00FEBA0E+8 Strength
+8 Agility
+30 Damage
|cff6495edIncrease damage by 2% of wielder's max Health.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique

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===== Magical Web
|c00FEBA0E+1 Vitality
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare

===== Plate Shield
|c00FEBA0E+5 Armor
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00959697Normal

===== Nature Ring
|cff6495ed10% chance that a wave of healing energy comes forth to heal 500 hit points of the wielder and up to 5 nearby allies when being attacked.|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique

===== Deadly Knife
|c00FEBA0E+12 Agility
+50 Damage
+15% Attack Speed
|cff6495ed10% chance that knives will fly around the wielder deal 600 damage to nearby enemies when attacking or being attacked.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique

===== Fire Cloak
|cff6495edBurns enemies around the wielder dealing 20 damage per second.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare

===== Crate of Wonder
|cff6495edA magical box with full of mystery.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FF0303Legendary

===== Exepede
|c00FEBA0E+8 Agility
+30 Damage
+10% Attack Speed
+10% Experience
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique

===== Energy Ball
|c00FEBA0E+8 Health Regen
+4 Mana Regen
+200 Magic Damage
|cff6495edGives an aura that increases life and mana regeneration of nearby allies by 25%.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique

===== Omega Gloves
|c00FEBA0E+5 Armor
+300 Health
+300 Mana
+10% Magic Damage
|cff6495edEach attack destroys (Int/2) mana of the attacked enemy.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FF8000Epic

===== Whip of Nature
|c00FEBA0E+40 Damage
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare

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===== Blood Charm
|c00FEBA0E+500 Health
+10 Health Regen
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00959697Normal

===== Thunder Gloves
|c00FEBA0E+25% Attack Speed
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare

===== Flute of Serenity
|cff6495edPut all nearby enemies fall asleep for 10 seconds when used. Sleeping units can be awoken by attacking it (600 seconds cooldown).
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FF8000Epic

===== Magical Diadem
|c00FEBA0E+30 Intelligence
+300 Health
+300 Mana
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare

===== Golden Trophy
|cff6495edRecovers 2500 health and 800 mana to all nearby allies over 15 seconds (60 seconds cooldown).
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique

===== Greedy Armor
|c00FEBA0E+5 Armor
+10% Gold
+1 Luck
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare

===== Lucky Clover
|c00FEBA0E+10% Experice
+10% Gold
+1 Luck
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare

===== Ice Crown
|c00FEBA0E+400 Health
+300 Mana
+1 Luck
|cff6495ed20% chance to cast a cone of frost dealing potent damage on casting. Every 50th intelligence points increases the damage by 300.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique

===== Ancient Leaf
|c00FEBA0E+600 Health
+25% Health Regen
+1 Luck
|cff6495ed10% chance that a wave of healing energy comes forth to heal 300 health of the wielder and up to 3 nearby allies when being attacked. Every 100th stats increases healing amount by 150.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique

===== Holy Seal
|c00FEBA0E+500 Mana
+50% Mana Regen
+1 Luck
+20% Magic Damage
|cff6495edRessurrect the wielder when he dies (300 seconds cooldown).
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique

My mouse is broken, so I can't test much. But it's OK, I'll send you the map later.

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Pourquoi on March 24, 2011, 01:01:50 am

Aero, in the next version I propose that you remove all items that you're not going to include in the campaign to save space and make things easier for us.

Quote

BTW, are you Vietnamese?

Yes.

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Stogo Helmet
|c00FEBA0E+2 Armor
+150 Health
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00959697Normal
Boots of Great Speed
|c00FEBA0E+50 Movement speed
Quality: |c007EBFF1Rare
Boots of Speed
|c00FEBA0E+25 Movement speed
Quality: |c00959697Normal
Guado Armor
|c00FEBA0E+5 Armor
+250 Health
Quality: |c00959697Normal
Magic Staff
|c00FEBA0E+6 Intellect
+100 Mana
+2 Mana Regen
+75 Magic Damage
Quality: |c007EBFF1Rare
Mage Armor
|c00FEBA0E+6 Armor
+300 Health
+300 Mana
Quality: |c00959697Normal
Health Gem
|c00FEBA0E+250 Health
+25% Health Regen
|cff6495ed20% chance to restore 50% of the Hero's health when he casts a spell.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique
Mana Gem
|c00FEBA0E+250 Mana
+25% Mana Regen
|cff6495ed20% chance to restore 50% of the Hero's mana when he casts a spell.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique
Branch of Rejuvenation
|c00FEBA0E+2 Health Regen
+2 Mana Regen
Quality: |c00959697Normal
Health Belt
|c00FEBA0E+200 Health
Quality: |c00959697Normal
Mana Belt
|c00FEBA0E+150 Mana
Quality: |c00959697Normal
Speedy Gauntlets
|c00FEBA0E+1 Armor
+5% Attack Speed
Quality: |c00959697Normal
Basement Key
|cff6495edUnlocks the basement door of Dragon Inn in chapter 5.
Quality: |c00959697Normal
Master Key
|cff6495edUnlocks all doors.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Aeroblyctos on March 24, 2011, 07:17:58 am

By the way guys, there are many errors in quality. Look closer you put the right one!

Quote from: Chimto on March 24, 2011, 01:01:50 am

Aero, in the next version I propose that you remove all items that you're not going to include in the campaign to save space and make things easier for us.

Well those items that I haven't made / are banned doesn't take much space(1 item takes like 1kb or something very small amount) and they won't make things faster(just like 0,000000001 second per item). The best way to make the campaign faster and "lighter" is to remove some models... And we can't do that.  :(

So I'll keep them there. I'll sooner or later either make something from them or remove them entirely.

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Pourquoi on March 24, 2011, 07:29:59 am

Well, removing a banned item will make stuff easier for us, since then we won't accidentally do their descriptions.

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Tears on March 24, 2011, 07:57:21 am

So I guess right... I just wander what "Chimto" means... But... maybe my head was a little... evil :)) (or you?!!!!). Anyway, since I want consider you an good companion, can I know your real name?
About me: Nguyen Hoang Hai

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Pourquoi on March 25, 2011, 12:40:10 am

Well, it's evil only in Vietnamese!

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My name: Tran Hoang Lan

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Tower Shield
|c00FEBA0E+6 Armor
Quality: |c00959697Normal

Amulet of Magic
|cff6495edRestores 30% of the Hero's mana when used. Cooldown: 15 seconds.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare

Amulet of Life
|cff6495edRestores 30% of the Hero's health when used. Cooldown: 15 seconds.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare

Amulet of Great Magic
|cff6495edRestores 50% of the Hero's mana when used. Cooldown: 15 seconds.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique

Amulet of Great Life
|cff6495edRestores 50% of the Hero's health when used. Cooldown: 15 seconds.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique

Ring of Agility
|c00FEBA0E+12 Agility
Quality: |c00959697Normal

Purple Stream
|c00FEBA0E+12 Intellect
Quality: |c00959697Normal

Amulet of Strength (yes, I fixed the name for you Aero)
|c00FEBA0E+12 Strength
Quality: |c00959697Normal

Gorgo Armor
|c00FEBA0E+6 Armor
+500 Health
Quality: |c007EBFF1Rare

Enchanted Leather Armor
|c00FEBA0E+5 Armor
+350 Health
+15 Agility
Quality: |c00FFFC01Unique

Wooden Round Shield
|c00FEBA0E+1 Armor
Quality: |c00959697Normal

Steel Round Shield
|c00FEBA0E+2 Armor
Quality: |c00959697Normal

Chain Pants
|c00FEBA0E+6 Armor
+600 Health
Quality: |c00959697Normal

Death Spike (Fixed the grammar for you, Tears)
|cff6495ed20% chance on attack to instantly kill any enemy whose level is equal to or lower than half of the Hero's level.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique

Nature Ring
|cff6495edWhen the Hero is attacked, there is a 10% chance that he and up to 5 nearby allies will be healed by 500 health.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique

Ancient Leaf
|c00FEBA0E+600 Health
+25% Health Regen
+1 Luck
|cff6495edWhen the Hero is attacked, there is a 10% chance that he and up to 3 nearby allies will be healed by 300 health. The healing is increased by 150 per 100 stats of the Hero.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique

Omega Orb 1
|c00FEBA0E+150 Mana
+5 All Stats
|cff6495edOccasionally summons an Elemental Golem with 500 health.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c007EBFF1Rare

Omega Orb 2
|c00FEBA0E+300 Mana
+10 All Stats
|cff6495edOccasionally summons an Elemental Golem with 750 health.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique

Omega Orb 3
|c00FEBA0E+450 Mana
+15 All Stats
|cff6495edOccasionally summons an Elemental Golem with 1000 health.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique

Omega Orb 4
|c00FEBA0E+600 Mana
+20 All Stats
|cff6495edOccasionally summons an Elemental Golem with 1000 health. The Golem gains 300 health per 100 stats of the Hero.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FF8000Epic

Omega Orb 5
|c00FEBA0E+600 Mana
+20 All Stats
+10% Magic Damage
|cff6495edOccasionally summons an Elemental Golem with 1000 health. The Golem gains 300 health per 100 stats of the Hero.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FF8000Epic

Omega Orb 6
|c00FEBA0E+600 Mana
+20 All Stats
+20% Magic Damage
|cff6495edOccasionally summons an Elemental Golem with 1000 health. The Golem gains 300 health per 100 stats of the Hero.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FF0303Legendary

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Tears on March 25, 2011, 03:35:00 am

Oh! That's a girl name, dun tell me that you are a girl! This week I have lots of DEADLINE, so I think I can't help you much. But I'll try. :D

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Pourquoi on March 25, 2011, 03:41:13 am

Hmm. This is my name (with full accents):

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TRẦN HO?NG L?N.

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Gladius
|c00FEBA0E+20 Damage
+5% Attack Speed
Quality: |c00959697Normal

Claymore
|c00FEBA0E+30 Damage
+5 All Stats
Quality: |c007EBFF1Rare

Ring of Wild Life
|c00FEBA0E+250 Health
+3 Health Regen
Quality: |c00959697Normal

Great Magic Staff
|c00FEBA0E+12 Intellect
+200 Mana
+4 Mana Regen
+125 Magic Damage
Quality: |c00FFFC01Unique

Angela Belt
|c00FEBA0E+500 Health
+6 Health Regen
Quality: |c007EBFF1Rare

Jade Ring
|c00FEBA0E+3 Agility
+150 Mana
Quality: |c00959697Normal

Magical Shoulders
|c00FEBA0E+3 Armor
+300 Mana
Quality: |c00959697Normal

Falchion
|c00FEBA0E+15 Agility
+70 Damage
+20% Critical Damage
Quality: |c00FFFC01Unique

Ring of Health
|c00FEBA0E+250 Health
+4 Health Regen
Quality: |c00959697Normal

Ring of Mana
|c00FEBA0E+125 Mana
+2 Mana Regen
Quality: |c00959697Normal

Mythril Saber
|c00FEBA0E+12 Damage
+5% Attack Speed
Quality: |c00959697Normal

Mythril Vest
|c00FEBA0E+3 Armor
+3 All Stats
Quality: |c00959697Normal

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Aeroblyctos on March 26, 2011, 02:07:59 pm

Good, good. Please continue and say when everything is done and I'll add everything all in one.

By the way, add a space so that I can see more clearly next item starts. I might do a mistake.

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Aeroblyctos on March 29, 2011, 01:22:34 pm

Hey.

How is this going? Is everything ready?

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Tears on March 29, 2011, 10:40:42 pm

Hm... This week I have mid-term tests, but there are just about 40 items to go right? OK, maybe Chimto is busy right now, I will help him the last items then send you in a txt file tomorrow. I don't have time to put it into a map so it maybe a little inconvenient for you...

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Pourquoi on March 30, 2011, 02:55:08 am

Spoiler (hover to show)

Ring of Great Mana
|c00FEBA0E+250 Mana
+4 Mana Regen 
Quality: |c00959697Normal

Ring of Great Health
|c00FEBA0E+500 Health
+8 Health Regen
Quality: |c00959697Normal

Gilmax
|c00FEBA0E+20 Intellect
+5 Mana Regen
+50 Damage
+10% Critical Damage
Quality: |c00FFFC01Unique

Power Ring
|c00FEBA0E+6 Strength
+400 Health
Quality: |c007EBFF1Rare

Decimation
|c00FEBA0E+50 Damage
+20 Strength
+15 Health Regen
+10% Critical Damage
Quality: |c00FFFC01Unique

Axe
|c00FEBA0E+25 Damage
Quality: |c00959697Normal

Wind Booster
|c00FEBA0E+25% Attack Speed
+100 Movement Speed
+5% Evasion
|cff6495ed33% chance on casting to summon a tornado which slows and deals 100 damage per second to enemy units around it.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FF8000Epic

Blood Price
|c00FEBA0E-50% Health Regen
-50% Mana Regen
|cff6495edGives an aura which gives nearby allies 50% more experience and gold earned from killing enemies.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique

Shard of Shadows
|c00FEBA0E+120 Damage
+30% Attack speed
+30% Critical Damage
+50% Steal Chance
|cff6495edCurses the attacked enemy for 10 seconds. The cursed enemy take extra damage from attacks equal to 0.01x(HEALTH+MANA). If the cursed enemy dies a shadow creature is created.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FF0303Legendary

Restore Mana
|c00FEBA0E+1000 Mana
+50% Mana Regen
+1 Vitality
|cff6495edFully restores the Hero's mana when used. Cooldown: 60 seconds.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FF8000Epic

Restore Life
|c00FEBA0E+1500 Health
+50% Health Regen
+1 Vitality
|cff6495edFully restores the Hero's health when used. Cooldown: 60 seconds.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FF8000Epic

Pete's Pipe
|c00FEBA0E+40 Intellect
+500 Mana
+10% Magic Damage
+1 Vitality
|cff6495edMultiplies the Hero's health and mana regeneration by 10 for 10 seconds when used. Cooldown: 60 seconds.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FF8000Epic

Skull Shield
|c00FEBA0E+15 Armor
|cff6495edCompletely return all melee damage received back to the attacker.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FF8000Epic

Ancient Staff
|c00FEBA0E+9 Intellect
+150 Mana
+3 Mana Regen
+100 Magic Damage
Quality: |c007EBFF1Rare

Azure Visage
|c00FEBA0E+5 Armor
+500 Mana
+30% Mana Regen
+10% Magic Damage
|cff6495edEvery 10th attack against the Hero restores 10% of his maximum mana.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique

Ankle Ring
|c00FEBA0E+2 Armor
|c00FEBA0E+200 Mana
|c00FEBA0E+12 Intellect
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00959697Normal

Rogue's Hood
|c00FEBA0E+5 Armor
+20% Attack Speed
+75 Movement Speed
+5% Evasion
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique

Mysterious Ring
|c00FEBA0EA very weird ring. It is uncertain what will happen if this item is put to use.
Quality: |c00FFFC01Unique.

Fire Elemental Circle
|c00FEBA0EAt first glance, it looks like a regular magic item, with a glowing heart in the middle of the circle heating it up. The longer you hold it in your hand, the stronger the magical energy it emits becomes. The vast amount of power is unlike anything you've ever felt before.
Quality: |c00FFFC01Unique.

Lightning Set
|c00FEBA0E+10 All Stats
+4 Armor
|cff6495edGives an aura which increase the movement speed of nearby allies by 25%.
Forms a shield of lightning around the Hero dealing (STATSx1) damage per second to enemies around.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique
Item Set: 1/4

Qzoch's Left Hand
|c00FEBA0E+30% Mana Regen
+50 Damage
+15% Critical Damage
|cff6495edRestore 25% of the Hero's max mana when he kills an enemy.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique
|c00FEBA0EItem Set (1/2)

Apocalypse
|c00FEBA0E+25 Strength
+80 Damage
+10% Attack Speed
+15% Experience
|cff6495ed5% chance on attack to create a pillar of fire which burns enemies for 100 to 500 damage. Lasts 5 seconds.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FF8000Epic
|c00FEBA0EItem Set (1/3)

Azureus Set (grammar fix, do the same thing to Azureus set parts)
|c00FEBA0E+14 Armor
+3000 Health
+1000 Mana
+80 Damage
|cff6495ed10% chance to heal a random nearby ally by 3500 when being attacked.
10% chance to deal 3500 damage to a random nearby enemy on attack.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FF0303Legendary
|c00FEBA0EItem Set (6/6)

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Aeroblyctos on March 30, 2011, 04:41:20 am

Tell me when everything is ready and put everything to a same place.

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Pourquoi on March 30, 2011, 10:03:46 am

Essentially it's completed, though the set items and synthesis items' special things need some grammar fixes. The regular items' descriptions are ready to be added.

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Tears on March 31, 2011, 08:03:58 am

Here is Chimto's work, I just help him copy all the posts before into one file.
http://www.mediafire.com/?883z6vyoy4dzihu (http://www.mediafire.com/?883z6vyoy4dzihu)

Everything's done, if there are no mistakes, you can close this thread Aero.

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Aeroblyctos on March 31, 2011, 03:45:15 pm

Excellent work, guys. You also made the new item descriptions.

Now if people come to blame me about descriptions I know who to blame.  ;)

Now about the credits, I'm currently writing them and will show you later. Both of you of course will be in the special credits.

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Pourquoi on April 03, 2011, 01:26:56 am

Quote

Both of you of course will be in the special credits.

Is this an April Fools thing?

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Tears on April 03, 2011, 09:07:51 am

Posted by: Aeroblyctos
? on: March 31, 2011, 12:45:15 PM ?

    * Insert Quote


Excellent work, guys. You also made the new item descriptions.

Now if people come to blame me about descriptions I know who to blame.  ;)

Now about the credits, I'm currently writing them and will show you later. Both of you of course will be in the special credits.



It's 31/3 ! NOT A JOKE CHIMTO, WE ARE CREDITED!

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Aeroblyctos on April 03, 2011, 03:46:28 pm

Yeaaaaaaaaaaaa. I updated the credit list.

Congratulations!!!

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: fruitstore on April 03, 2011, 08:17:31 pm

Quote from: Aeroblyctos on March 31, 2011, 03:45:15 pm

Now if people come to blame me about descriptions I know who to blame.  ;)

haha, that's funny!

Title: Re: Item Description Help
Post by: Aeroblyctos on April 14, 2011, 12:41:43 am

Now I'll close this thread! Well done guys, once again.