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BIG NOTE ON SUGGESTIONS
You may note how much I say 'suggestion' because I know they are suggestions. If you don't take the suggestion and correct the error another way, thats fine with me. As long as it gets corrected =D Any non-error fixing suggestions are also JUST suggestions. If you consider it, thats more than good enough for me.
BIG NOTE ON COMMAS: I highlight the word before a new comma green so that it is more easily noticed. The green word itself is not changed, just a new comma is after it.
MISC CORRECTIONS/SUGGESTIONS
New game - when the yellow text about selecting abilities comes up, you have (down-right) to describe where to mouse over the abilities - we typically use (bottom-right) instead. But people will get it either way!