About chapter 8, I would like an epic fight with kitablade!! this guy looks so amazing congrats for the model!!
Besides that, make the fortress a bit bigger, I think it should be a bit more important. If you have room, make it a bit bigger than troll village cuz u know, it's pretty big on the world map for what it is in reality.
Also, give Galeoth a bit more importance. I found that phodom and fradtz are in most of the cinematics and galeoth doesn't talk alot. It would be nice that he gets separated from his friends just a little while to test his strength alone.