K lemme just profile this thing first... Don't mind the spoiler, it's just my notes, skip to the next paragraph.
Right, so, what's new in here compared to the miasma that Aero is already narrating on chapter 1? When I play TCO and when I read this, the main message is always the "revenge". There is one thing however, that caught my attention here:
I had buried all my hope and happiness under the soil of Dalli. The moment I placed Birgitta's necklace on her coffin, something inside me broke into pieces.
Did Phodom actually bury his family? Or did you just add new content to Aero's story? If he had done that, it would've had to happen in chapter 1. But I don't remember such thing happening. You might think that because Phodom is a human, he's forced to bury the dead of his ilk, but there's no-one to bury those bandits on that same chapter either, are there? Aero could well stand out and make Phodom stuff his family to make them not look like dead, maybe because he got insane or something.
So... #inb4addingnewcontent. Otherwise I guess it's cool.