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Re: Item Description Help
« Reply #15 on: March 22, 2011, 10:13:41 am »
Scythe of Annihilation is fine I guess.

Your Anaho Relic descriptions isn't correct. You used too many times color codes. Also "(INTx0.1) Mana Regen" that is actually a special thing, not a basic bonus even if it looks like a normal bonus...

Thanks for fixing the description.

Hey this is REALLY unorganized. Give me at least 10 items per post. If you just give like few descriptions per post it takes longer for me to open the campaign than copying those texts to the campaign(but of course I have campaign open all the times... but you get the point).

EDIT: Heh, heh. I just made Sargatanas!

|c00FEBA0ERequired: |c00E55BB0Orichalcon, Qzoch's Set, Restoration Belt, Greater Magic Ball and Jade
|c00FEBA0E+300 Damage
+25% Attack Speed
+30% Critical Damage
+1500 Health
+1200 Mana
+50% Health Regen
+50% Mana Regen
|cff6495edEvery Attack restores 3% back of wielder's maximum health and mana. Every kill restores 50% of wielder's maximum health and mana.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FF0303Legendary
« Last Edit: March 22, 2011, 10:24:52 am by Aeroblyctos »

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Re: Item Description Help
« Reply #16 on: March 22, 2011, 01:35:19 pm »
I had already done with the Misc Items.
Here for you Aero: http://www.mediafire.com/?awh2x6qm9256baf
If there are too many items you don't like the description just simply tell me, I wil try again, you just focus on your job.

@Chimto: if you need help just give me the tilte of the items you want me to do.
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Re: Item Description Help
« Reply #17 on: March 23, 2011, 12:52:47 am »
Skull of Chaos
|cff6495ed10% chance on attack to reduce the attacked enemy's damage by 20% for 2 seconds.
When used, removes up to 10 charges from the Skull of Chaos, then deals damage equal to (number of charges removed+LVL)x10 and reduces armor of all enemies around the Hero equal to the number of charges removed for 10 seconds.
Gains a charge when the Hero kills an enemy.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique
Golden Claw
|c00FEBA0E+60 Damage
+25% Attack speed
+30% Experience
+30% Gold
|cff6495ed4% chance on attack to summon a Mummy. The Mummy gains 10% health and damage per 50 stats of the Hero. Lasts 30 seconds.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique
Holy Seal
|c00FEBA0E+500 Mana
+50% Mana Regen
+20% Magic Damage
+1 Luck
|cff6495edResurrects the Hero when he dies. Cooldown: 300 seconds.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique
Doom Sword
|c00FEBA0E+60 Damage
+14 Strength
|cff6495ed25% splash damage.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique
Necromancer Staff
|c00FEBA0E+15 Intellect
+250 Mana
+5 Mana Regen
+150 Magic Damage
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FFFC01Unique
Dragon Amulet
|c00FEBA0E+25 Intellect
+25% Magic Damage
+1 Vitality
|cff6495edRestores mana of the Hero equal to INT when he casts a spell.
|c00FEBA0EQuality: |c00FF8000Epic
Along the shore the cloud waves break,
The twin suns sink behind the lake,
The shadows lengthen
In Carcosa.

Strange is the night where black stars rise,
And strange moons circle through the skies,
But stranger still is
Lost Carcosa.

Songs that the Hyades shall sing,
Where flap the tatters of the King,
Must die unheard in
Dim Carcosa.

Song of my soul, my voice is dead,
Die thou, unsung, as tears unshed
Shall dry and die in
Lost Carcosa.
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Re: Item Description Help
« Reply #18 on: March 23, 2011, 03:28:53 pm »
I had already done with the Misc Items.
Here for you Aero: http://www.mediafire.com/?awh2x6qm9256baf
If there are too many items you don't like the description just simply tell me, I wil try again, you just focus on your job.

@Chimto: if you need help just give me the tilte of the items you want me to do.

Excellent work, Tears. I don't see any mistakes. Perfect, simply perfect.

To Cimto: "25% splash damage." people might not understand the meaning of this. Can you please make it a little more accurate? I think that's made from cleaving attack(The Pit Lord strikes with such force that he damages multiple enemies with his attack. |n|n|cffffcc00Level 1|r - <ANca,DataA1,%>% damage is splash. |n|cffffcc00Level 2|r - <ANca,DataA2,%>% damage is splash. |n|cffffcc00Level 3|r - <ANca,DataA3,%>% damage is splash.)

Otherwise perfect also.

Also, can you combine all your texts to one place and then give it to me? I mean once everything is ready from your part. Then I'll put them all to the campaign same time.

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Re: Item Description Help
« Reply #19 on: March 23, 2011, 11:02:09 pm »
Ok, Now that I know I do things right, I continue helping speed up the progress with Chimto.

@Chimto:
I will do the items from bottom to top. But for your convenience, I will now post my description here. BTW, are you Vietnamese?
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Re: Item Description Help
« Reply #20 on: March 24, 2011, 12:27:53 am »
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My mouse is broken, so I can't test much. But it's OK, I'll send you the map later.




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Re: Item Description Help
« Reply #21 on: March 24, 2011, 01:01:50 am »
Aero, in the next version I propose that you remove all items that you're not going to include in the campaign to save space and make things easier for us.
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BTW, are you Vietnamese?
Yes.
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« Last Edit: March 24, 2011, 01:44:30 am by Chimto »
Along the shore the cloud waves break,
The twin suns sink behind the lake,
The shadows lengthen
In Carcosa.

Strange is the night where black stars rise,
And strange moons circle through the skies,
But stranger still is
Lost Carcosa.

Songs that the Hyades shall sing,
Where flap the tatters of the King,
Must die unheard in
Dim Carcosa.

Song of my soul, my voice is dead,
Die thou, unsung, as tears unshed
Shall dry and die in
Lost Carcosa.
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Re: Item Description Help
« Reply #22 on: March 24, 2011, 07:17:58 am »
By the way guys, there are many errors in quality. Look closer you put the right one!

Aero, in the next version I propose that you remove all items that you're not going to include in the campaign to save space and make things easier for us.

Well those items that I haven't made / are banned doesn't take much space(1 item takes like 1kb or something very small amount) and they won't make things faster(just like 0,000000001 second per item). The best way to make the campaign faster and "lighter" is to remove some models... And we can't do that.  :(

So I'll keep them there. I'll sooner or later either make something from them or remove them entirely.

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« Reply #23 on: March 24, 2011, 07:29:59 am »
Well, removing a banned item will make stuff easier for us, since then we won't accidentally do their descriptions.
Along the shore the cloud waves break,
The twin suns sink behind the lake,
The shadows lengthen
In Carcosa.

Strange is the night where black stars rise,
And strange moons circle through the skies,
But stranger still is
Lost Carcosa.

Songs that the Hyades shall sing,
Where flap the tatters of the King,
Must die unheard in
Dim Carcosa.

Song of my soul, my voice is dead,
Die thou, unsung, as tears unshed
Shall dry and die in
Lost Carcosa.
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Re: Item Description Help
« Reply #24 on: March 24, 2011, 07:57:21 am »
So I guess right... I just wander what "Chimto" means... But... maybe my head was a little... evil :)) (or you?!!!!). Anyway, since I want consider you an good companion, can I know your real name?
About me: Nguyen Hoang Hai
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Re: Item Description Help
« Reply #25 on: March 25, 2011, 12:40:10 am »
Well, it's evil only in Vietnamese!
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« Last Edit: March 26, 2011, 06:56:15 pm by Chimto »
Along the shore the cloud waves break,
The twin suns sink behind the lake,
The shadows lengthen
In Carcosa.

Strange is the night where black stars rise,
And strange moons circle through the skies,
But stranger still is
Lost Carcosa.

Songs that the Hyades shall sing,
Where flap the tatters of the King,
Must die unheard in
Dim Carcosa.

Song of my soul, my voice is dead,
Die thou, unsung, as tears unshed
Shall dry and die in
Lost Carcosa.
TCO Item List

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Re: Item Description Help
« Reply #26 on: March 25, 2011, 03:35:00 am »
Oh! That's a girl name, dun tell me that you are a girl! This week I have lots of DEADLINE, so I think I can't help you much. But I'll try. :D
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« Reply #27 on: March 25, 2011, 03:41:13 am »
Hmm. This is my name (with full accents):
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« Last Edit: March 26, 2011, 06:54:34 pm by Chimto »
Along the shore the cloud waves break,
The twin suns sink behind the lake,
The shadows lengthen
In Carcosa.

Strange is the night where black stars rise,
And strange moons circle through the skies,
But stranger still is
Lost Carcosa.

Songs that the Hyades shall sing,
Where flap the tatters of the King,
Must die unheard in
Dim Carcosa.

Song of my soul, my voice is dead,
Die thou, unsung, as tears unshed
Shall dry and die in
Lost Carcosa.
TCO Item List

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Re: Item Description Help
« Reply #28 on: March 26, 2011, 02:07:59 pm »
Good, good. Please continue and say when everything is done and I'll add everything all in one.

By the way, add a space so that I can see more clearly next item starts. I might do a mistake.

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Re: Item Description Help
« Reply #29 on: March 29, 2011, 01:22:34 pm »
Hey.

How is this going? Is everything ready?