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Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
« on: May 25, 2011, 10:58:43 pm »
Grammar mistakes:
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- There are many Summoning Circles around the Oelivert. Magic Guild uses them for something.
Should be: '- There are many Summoning Circles around the Oelivert. The Magic Guild uses them for some sort of purpose.'
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- Did you know that the trolls are dragon worshipers?
Should be: '- Did you know that the trolls are dragon worshippers?'
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- The world is filled with thousands of starts. But you can always clearly see 2 and the sun.
You mean 'stars'?
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- Orcs are so keen to magic just like us. That's why we share many projects together.
Should be: '- Orcs are so keen on magic just like us. That's why we share many projects together.'
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- Welcome to Army Quarters!
Should be: '- Welcome to the Army Quarters!'
Along the shore the cloud waves break,
The twin suns sink behind the lake,
The shadows lengthen
In Carcosa.

Strange is the night where black stars rise,
And strange moons circle through the skies,
But stranger still is
Lost Carcosa.

Songs that the Hyades shall sing,
Where flap the tatters of the King,
Must die unheard in
Dim Carcosa.

Song of my soul, my voice is dead,
Die thou, unsung, as tears unshed
Shall dry and die in
Lost Carcosa.
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