Grammar mistakes:
- There are many Summoning Circles around the Oelivert. Magic Guild uses them for something.
Should be: '- There are many Summoning Circles around the Oelivert. The Magic Guild uses them for some sort of purpose.'
- Did you know that the trolls are dragon worshipers?
Should be: '- Did you know that the trolls are dragon worshippers?'
- The world is filled with thousands of starts. But you can always clearly see 2 and the sun.
You mean 'stars'?
- Orcs are so keen to magic just like us. That's why we share many projects together.
Should be: '- Orcs are so keen on magic just like us. That's why we share many projects together.'
- Welcome to Army Quarters!
Should be: '- Welcome to the Army Quarters!'