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Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
« Reply #15 on: June 29, 2011, 01:13:40 pm »
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- Guard's job is boring. I've been thiking to become a merchant.
It should be thinking not"thiking"

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Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
« Reply #16 on: June 29, 2011, 02:36:29 pm »
Yeah, fixed.

I also put some more. I've feeling we're almost finished here.

Now someone quickly check and fix if needed. Then I'll add them to the campaign. Thanks!

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Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
« Reply #17 on: June 29, 2011, 04:14:47 pm »
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I've heard if you drink enough sludge you can see the creator.
I've heard that you can see the creator when you drink enough sludge.
I think this one will be better.

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Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
« Reply #18 on: June 30, 2011, 04:07:55 am »
Okay. Anything else?

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Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
« Reply #19 on: June 30, 2011, 11:12:35 am »
Quite a bit more mistakes than I thought, I'd think some people would pick up on some of these but I can expect that, I'm OCD when it comes to English so that's why I notice so many of these, haha. Anyhow, all the sentences left in were wrong and are now in their corrected version. I think this batch of floating texts is all correct now. Of course, anyone is free to double check me, I sometimes make mistakes.

Entrance

- A guard's job is boring. I've been thinking about becoming a merchant.
- Terdoom Castle is gigantic in it's size.
- I think I've heard something about dragons... I've got a bad feeling about this.
- This is the entrance to the glorious Terdoom Castle!
- An order was given to delay the rest of the guests.

Main roads/districts and parks

- Thousands and thousands of people live in this city today, and more is coming every day!
- This city has many parks that makes the atmosphere more relaxing.
- There are many Summoning Circles around Oelivert. The Magic Guild uses them for some sort of purpose.
- I've always wondered... Why did the war start in the first place? Did we fight for nothing?
- Terdoom Castle is just too big. I always get myself lost in here!

Magic Research

- I heard the trolls around the Icy Mountains are having some huge problems.
- There are many mysterious powers in this world yet to be found.
- The sky is filled with thousands of stars. But if you look close you can see two stars and the Sun.
- Many answers would have been answered a long time ago if we would have cooperation with the dragons.

Magic Guild

- It is said that the most powerful fighters come from Northern tribes... Just like Xanothin.

Army Quarters

- If you are strong and dedicated enough, you can be promoted from the army to a dragon slayer!

Market Areas

- There are so many interesting items that I pissed in my pants.
- There are many games to be played here.
- I'm searching for some nice swords and axes.
I got two playthroughs now. One on Extreme and ****! Be sure to check them out in the Walkthroughs Sub-Forum.

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Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
« Reply #20 on: July 04, 2011, 08:43:06 am »
Thanks man.

Now I put everything to the campaign.

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Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
« Reply #21 on: July 04, 2011, 09:30:32 pm »
What about:
'I know it's a trite old question by now, but what's your favourite lobe of a trilobite?'
'Modern RPGs are just all about grinding, anyway, and I can't stand it.'
'Where is the honour in defeating others without a real cause? I don't believe in strength for the sake of strength.'
'This pool of water would be great for swimming to get away from the scorching heat! Too bad you can't swim in this game, and neither can I!'
'The city is full of merchants. You may have to shop around a bit to find the best wares, but beware; some merchants can't be trusted!'
'Why do we have to work ALL the time? It's not fair! We should just get paid even if we don't work! I don't like *earning* money! I just want it! Want want want! Waaah!'
'This armour makes me look really *fat*, which is funny because fat is exactly what I'm not!'
'This world is weak. Weak worlds are craving to be destroyed. Simply craving. I am merely doing a service to the universe by ridding it of this rubbish. Tidying up.'
« Last Edit: July 08, 2011, 02:17:26 am by Chimto »
Along the shore the cloud waves break,
The twin suns sink behind the lake,
The shadows lengthen
In Carcosa.

Strange is the night where black stars rise,
And strange moons circle through the skies,
But stranger still is
Lost Carcosa.

Songs that the Hyades shall sing,
Where flap the tatters of the King,
Must die unheard in
Dim Carcosa.

Song of my soul, my voice is dead,
Die thou, unsung, as tears unshed
Shall dry and die in
Lost Carcosa.
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Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
« Reply #22 on: July 07, 2011, 09:05:46 am »
Okay thanks but I felt like half of your texts doesn't really fit.  :o

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Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
« Reply #23 on: July 08, 2011, 06:08:53 am »
Actually I still need more texts. I run out of texts and my mind is empty now.

These kind of areas are still lacking text:

- Auction Hall
- Army Quarters
- Few Parks
- Zoo
- Church Areas
- Graveyard
« Last Edit: July 08, 2011, 07:16:38 am by Aeroblyctos »

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Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
« Reply #24 on: July 08, 2011, 07:28:19 am »
Park:
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This pool of water would be great for swimming to get away from the scorching heat! Too bad you can't swim in this game, and neither can I!
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I wish people threw money into this fountain so then I could nick it.
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Facial hair is disgusting. Not appealing at all.
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Tharo-kun's soo kawaii~~~! Desu.
Auction Hall:
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MUMMY CAN I HAVE SOMETHING TO EAT CAN I MUMMY HUH HUH MUMMY WHY AREN'T YOU PAYING ATTENTION TO ME MUMMY MUMMY MUMMY MUMMY MUMMY I WANT SOMETHING TO EAT CAN I GO TO THE TOILET?!?!
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Ugh. I hate having a family. I hate it so much. I can't even kill them to be rid of the pain and torture. Maybe I can just sell them off as slaves here. If they even DO that sort of thing.
Army Quarters:
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Where is the honour in defeating others without a real cause? I don't believe in strength for the sake of strength.
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This armour makes me look really *fat*, which is funny because fat is exactly what I'm not!
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I came all the way here to deliver something to the King, but I'm not even allowed into the palace for some reason!
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You know *I'm* against unnecessary bloodshed...
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Evil people do need to be brought to justice, but by just slaughtering them mercilessly, we're no better than they are.
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Well, I'd only kill a guy if he killed me first!
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I'm not really injured, y'know. Just lazy. But don't tell anone, or I'll rip yer bleedin' 'ead off wi' me bare hands, yer cretin!
Church:
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Gods... I hate 'em! I've been devoting my life to this [PROFANITY]in' Xyrzious deity, and what he has done for me? But anyway, I recommend that you really should visit the church, guys! Xyrzious is a truly wonderful deity who you really should worship and donate your money to!
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All Hail Xyrzious! That's what we devoted priests say to greet people. And all the time, during many situations. Like during the climax of copulation. Not that we do that, since we're priests and all.
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I will pay none of my vast riches to any blasted gods! Why, Xyrzious should be paying ME tithes!
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This man hasn't paid his monthly tithe to the Church. Tsk, people like this will regret their greed in their next lives, I tell you...
Graveyard:
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If you try to desecrate the graves, I will kill you ten times before you hit the ground, devil.
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Watching this flame burns reminds me of my life... Hot, yellow, flickering, constant yet chaotic within boundaries, and dull as hell.
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I'm a Necromancer, yeeees, yeeees! I'll necromance you, Galeoth, you... you festering blightering blightery... blighter, with your... your.... yeeeeees... your robe, your robe...
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Gods, I'm depressed.
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I despise the sun. It gives me nightmares.
Market:
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Your clothes are sickeningly ugly! You need to buy some of my trendier armours so then people don't throw rocks at you for looking so ridiculous, even though your appearance would look the same whatever you've equipped!
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Would you like to purchase some instruments of death? I'm not surprised, what with you being barbaric savages and all!
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I sleep on bags o' money at night! Myep.
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You see, mathematically, since I have no hair, and dividing by zero results in infinity, it shall take an infinite amount of time to wash my hair.
What do you think?
« Last Edit: July 13, 2011, 07:21:46 am by Chimto »
Along the shore the cloud waves break,
The twin suns sink behind the lake,
The shadows lengthen
In Carcosa.

Strange is the night where black stars rise,
And strange moons circle through the skies,
But stranger still is
Lost Carcosa.

Songs that the Hyades shall sing,
Where flap the tatters of the King,
Must die unheard in
Dim Carcosa.

Song of my soul, my voice is dead,
Die thou, unsung, as tears unshed
Shall dry and die in
Lost Carcosa.
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Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
« Reply #25 on: July 13, 2011, 08:04:05 am »
Okay, THANKS!

Now all floating texts are done.

Once again, thanks to EVERYONE who helped me with the case!  ;)