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Floating texts for chapter 7
« on: May 25, 2011, 12:58:38 pm »
Hello.

I'm once again searching for help. This time I need some floating texts for chapter 7. Also check out my grammar, I don't want any spelling errors.

The texts can be like anything but not TOOOOOOOOOOO random and not TOOOOOOOOOOOO long.


Entrance

- A guard's job is boring. I've been thinking about becoming a merchant.
- Terdoom Castle is gigantic in it's size.
- I think I've heard something about dragons... I've got a bad feeling about this.
- This is the entrance to the glorious Terdoom Castle!
- We've received new orders not to let anymore citizens in.
- An order was given to delay the rest of the guests.
- I've heard a command that the magical domes will be activated again.
- Are the dragons... Still alive!?
- It's been a tough day, first the guest inspection and now this.


Main roads/districts and parks

- I'm proud to walk on these glorious streets!
- This city is remarkable!
- Thousands and thousands of people live in this city today, and more is coming every day!
- The city is expanding so fast, it has already grown far from the original walls.
- This city has many parks that makes the atmosphere more relaxing.
- There are many Summoning Circles around Oelivert. The Magic Guild uses them for some sort of purpose.
- Did you know that the trolls are dragon worshipers?
- I think the dragons were always overrated.
- I remember that face... Fradz... You made my girl pregnant and left
- Libraries can hold ancient history. But I heard almost all of them were burned in the war.
- I've always wondered... Why did the war start in the first place? Did we fight for nothing?
- I heard the dragons are back... But the king told us they're all dead.
- I want to be a wanderer. Everyday I help people and defeat monsters.
- I never get to go adventuring because me mum won't let me!
- Terdoom Castle is just too big. I always get myself lost in here!
- My dream is to work in the castle serving the king someday.
- Terdoom Castle is the safest place in the world!
- I was wondering why our world's name is Oelivert.
- I think the infrastructure in here is too boring. Everything is just so plain.
- This city is just too huge!
- I wonder how many people live in here. Everyday more and more people move here.
- The road is wide, maybe a little too wide.

Magic Research

- I heard the trolls around the Icy Mountains are having some huge problems.
- There are many mysterious powers in this world yet to be found.
- We humans have some interesting powers that we don't know much about.
- I wonder what's the source of magic?
- The dragons clearly are the most powerful when it comes to magic.
- Many answers would have been answered a long time ago if we would have cooperation with the dragons.

Magic Guild

- Orcs are so keen on magic just like us. That's why we share many projects together.
- Our biggest project is to create the enormous Teleportation System.
- Summoning Circles were used in the war against the dragons.
- It is said that the most powerful fighters come from Northern tribes... Just like Xanothin.
- Magic Guild is the biggest guild in the whole world!
- This guild has no boundaries, we're everywhere!

Army Quarters

- Welcome to the Army Quarters!
- This is one of many Army Quarters in the city. Welcome!
- We still have a strong military after the war.
- If you are strong and dedicated enough, you can be promoted from the army to a dragon slayer!
- Did you know that most of the dragon slayers comes from the army?
- The world is filled with magic... I don't trust magic.
- Phodom, may the hammer be with you always!
- Phodom, it's been a long time. I still remember your excellent leadership!
- Life and death is unpredictable. Destiny is the only thing I believe in.
- Stay on your business.
- My dream is to become a dragon slayer. I've been training hard to become one.

Market Areas

- There are so many interesting items that I pissed in my pants.
- I wish I had more money.
- Did you know that the trolls are the second largest race after humans by population?
- Your items are indeed powerful, but I've seen even more powerful items.
- Some dragons have been seen... I must prepare myself for a second conflict!
- I really hate this city... Too big for my taste!
- There are many games to be played here.
- Gladiator Arena? Wow, that's a scary place.
- I've heard that you can see the creator when you drink enough sludge.
- I'm a merchant and I've been doing a lot business with Kar'Gath.
- The business here is great.
- I'm searching for some nice swords and axes.
« Last Edit: July 04, 2011, 08:42:46 am by Aeroblyctos »

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Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
« Reply #1 on: May 25, 2011, 10:58:43 pm »
Grammar mistakes:
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- There are many Summoning Circles around the Oelivert. Magic Guild uses them for something.
Should be: '- There are many Summoning Circles around the Oelivert. The Magic Guild uses them for some sort of purpose.'
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- Did you know that the trolls are dragon worshipers?
Should be: '- Did you know that the trolls are dragon worshippers?'
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- The world is filled with thousands of starts. But you can always clearly see 2 and the sun.
You mean 'stars'?
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- Orcs are so keen to magic just like us. That's why we share many projects together.
Should be: '- Orcs are so keen on magic just like us. That's why we share many projects together.'
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- Welcome to Army Quarters!
Should be: '- Welcome to the Army Quarters!'
Along the shore the cloud waves break,
The twin suns sink behind the lake,
The shadows lengthen
In Carcosa.

Strange is the night where black stars rise,
And strange moons circle through the skies,
But stranger still is
Lost Carcosa.

Songs that the Hyades shall sing,
Where flap the tatters of the King,
Must die unheard in
Dim Carcosa.

Song of my soul, my voice is dead,
Die thou, unsung, as tears unshed
Shall dry and die in
Lost Carcosa.
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Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
« Reply #2 on: May 26, 2011, 09:54:40 am »
Thanks!

Fixed.

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Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
« Reply #3 on: May 28, 2011, 09:08:11 pm »
dont be so shy!

Some guys on the street should say:

- I wonder who was our creator?

-(pretty girl) If I only could meet Aero *sigh*

- Dragons are overrated anyway, what about Zergs?

-Anyone seen my drIgonPAD?

- (some priest) I cant really answer your questions how our world was created... infact I dont know nothing (kills himself cause of deep depression afterwards)

-some random girl to Fradz: Fradz im pregnant!

-some random old women to Galeoth: Galeoth, search my library - there are some secrets you never could dream off! ;)

-random guy: you cant be Dragon Slayers, your equipment sucks

-other guy: check tcocamgaign.com for help!


-random guy: Phodom may your Hammer be with you!


 ;D ::) :P


« Last Edit: May 28, 2011, 09:26:46 pm by pl4ton »

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Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
« Reply #4 on: May 29, 2011, 03:20:56 am »
Thanks, I added some. They're not exactly like yours but the idea behind them is yours.

More, more, more!

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Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
« Reply #5 on: May 29, 2011, 06:50:47 am »
Some random guy: 'I'm trying to think up a good adventurer name, for when I become an adventurer, which I will one of these days! Uh, anyway, I'm thinking of maybe calling myself 'Amiable Dingo'? Has a nice ring to it, don't you think?'
Along the shore the cloud waves break,
The twin suns sink behind the lake,
The shadows lengthen
In Carcosa.

Strange is the night where black stars rise,
And strange moons circle through the skies,
But stranger still is
Lost Carcosa.

Songs that the Hyades shall sing,
Where flap the tatters of the King,
Must die unheard in
Dim Carcosa.

Song of my soul, my voice is dead,
Die thou, unsung, as tears unshed
Shall dry and die in
Lost Carcosa.
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Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
« Reply #6 on: May 29, 2011, 07:03:53 am »
That's too long. Cut it to half and then it's okay I guess.

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Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
« Reply #7 on: May 29, 2011, 07:16:03 am »
This is what I want for my life: "I want to be a wanderer. Everyday I help people and defeat monsters."
and then "Life and death is unpredictable. Destiny is the only thing I believe in".






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Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
« Reply #8 on: May 29, 2011, 08:40:15 am »
Good ones. Thanks.

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Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
« Reply #9 on: May 30, 2011, 12:36:45 am »
Greeeetings here, Phodom!
This is the Army Quarters!
You're welcome here!
Along the shore the cloud waves break,
The twin suns sink behind the lake,
The shadows lengthen
In Carcosa.

Strange is the night where black stars rise,
And strange moons circle through the skies,
But stranger still is
Lost Carcosa.

Songs that the Hyades shall sing,
Where flap the tatters of the King,
Must die unheard in
Dim Carcosa.

Song of my soul, my voice is dead,
Die thou, unsung, as tears unshed
Shall dry and die in
Lost Carcosa.
TCO Item List

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Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
« Reply #10 on: May 30, 2011, 12:11:35 pm »
Great.

More.

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Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
« Reply #11 on: June 04, 2011, 08:42:01 am »
A JOKE: two guys are chatting:

A: Do you know that Fable III has just been released?
B: Oh, I played the demo, it sucks!
A: How about The Witcher II, it's released in the same week?
B: Oh, it's great but I'm not in the mood.
A: Why? Too many... ehem.... adults scenes?
B: No, that's not the reason.
A: Then what?
B: I'm just waiting for The Chosen One.
A: In that case.. Can I borrow your computer?
B: Why don't use yours?
A: Mine is just not strong enough to play those games.
B: No way.
A: Why?
B: BECAUSE MY PLAYER WANT TO PLAY THE CHOSEN ONE, NOT WATCH YOU PLAY YOUR GAMES!
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Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
« Reply #12 on: June 04, 2011, 08:54:50 am »
What about:
'My weight already
went all the way up in like
the blink of an eye'?
Or
''I never get to go adventuring because me mum won't let me!'
Along the shore the cloud waves break,
The twin suns sink behind the lake,
The shadows lengthen
In Carcosa.

Strange is the night where black stars rise,
And strange moons circle through the skies,
But stranger still is
Lost Carcosa.

Songs that the Hyades shall sing,
Where flap the tatters of the King,
Must die unheard in
Dim Carcosa.

Song of my soul, my voice is dead,
Die thou, unsung, as tears unshed
Shall dry and die in
Lost Carcosa.
TCO Item List

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Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
« Reply #13 on: June 04, 2011, 09:18:47 am »
A JOKE: two guys are chatting:

A: Do you know that Fable III has just been released?
B: Oh, I played the demo, it sucks!
A: How about The Witcher II, it's released in the same week?
B: Oh, it's great but I'm not in the mood.
A: Why? Too many... ehem.... adults scenes?
B: No, that's not the reason.
A: Then what?
B: I'm just waiting for The Chosen One.
A: In that case.. Can I borrow your computer?
B: Why don't use yours?
A: Mine is just not strong enough to play those games.
B: No way.
A: Why?
B: BECAUSE MY PLAYER WANT TO PLAY THE CHOSEN ONE, NOT WATCH YOU PLAY YOUR GAMES!

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I... Really... Don't... Know... What... To... Say...!


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Re: Floating texts for chapter 7
« Reply #14 on: June 24, 2011, 07:32:44 am »
Let's go serious if we ever want to finish this request. I'll finish the floating texts within one week and will do a lot of them when I travel back to home(next Monday). In the mean time give me your ideas for floating texts.