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Aeroblyctos

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Balance & Grammar fix
« on: February 26, 2013, 04:12:10 am »
Hey.

Anyone here wanna help me quickly? Within a day or two. The theme is the starting packs.

I need you to have good English skills to fix grammar errors there might be and also some experience with the campaign itself. So... Anyone?

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Re: Balance & Grammar fix
« Reply #1 on: February 27, 2013, 10:05:33 pm »
Why not just send it to someone reliable and active instead of posting publicly on the forum? It's very inactive right now.
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Re: Balance & Grammar fix
« Reply #2 on: February 28, 2013, 02:05:57 am »
Yea. To you. Haha.

I just didn't want to burden you too much.
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