Okay, the judge is here. We have three entries. I believe Doomlord's entry doesn't meet the theme of the competition. I just see a lot of details but the boss fight itself is missing. That is what I'm seeking.
Now, here we go. We have a great battle betweern Blackdoom58 and Xavorn. Both have two entries, let's see who wins....
Blackdoom59's "The Death Knight"
+/- You made three phases, good thing. But none of the phases were unique, bad thing.
+/- It's always nice to see someone trying to make a story for the boss too. However your story is half done.
+ I like the first phase's first event.
+ I like the attack speed bonus thing, it can lead to good and strategic boss fight.
- The explosion event doesn't need any strategy or quick reflexes, it's only about luck which is a bad thing.
- The models are a little bit too different from each other being the same enemy.
I think you tried a little bit too unique approach. You created three phases but none of them were unique. You should have focuses on one phase and making it great.
2/5
Xavorn's "Nevermore the Raven"
+ Presentation is easy to understand and well made.
+ By making the boss invulnerable the whole fight is a new trick.
- I don't like that "Flying Charges" can be only avoided with luck, there should be something that shows player how to evade and when.
It's a new way to make the boss itself invulnerable. However you gave too little for the boss fight itself making the whole fight, I believe, too simple and boring. This type of boss fight should have needed a lot of minor enemies all the time. Now it's all about evading a simple charge spell that can only be avoided by luck.
2/5
Xavorn's "Shannon the Lunatic"
+ Presentation is easy to understand and well made
+ I liked the "Lunatic Explosion" event
Overall the boss just evades playing by teleporting short distances and doing one event called "Lunatic Explosion" which is an okay idea. The should have something more going on, but for a mini-boss this would be okay.
2,5/5
Blackdoom59's "The Undead Flamelord"
+ Presentation is easy to understand and well made
+ Excellent model choise
+ Using corpses is a new way
+ "Carrior swarm" is a great idea
+/- "Fire nova" is not that unique, but it acceptable
The overall idea of the boss is nice. Using corpses is a new way to create a boss. I like what you've done. What I miss is that the boss doesn't have an efficent event.
3/5
And the winner is Blackdoom59! Congratulations!