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Competition #33
« on: November 21, 2011, 02:28:36 pm »
Competition Idea

I've removed the current Gate Puzzle from chapter 6 and I'll need a new one. It's time to create a puzzle for this place.




Hints

    • Try to make the puzzle small as possible without taking much space.
    • You can include some fighting in the puzzle(as a punishment, as a final boss, or the whole puzzle can be a boss fight but there must be an unique way of killing the boss)
    • It is possible use objects like elevators and regions.
    • You can take ideas from other games but please try to make it your own idea at least somehow.
    • I've added red circles to places where the puzzle can be(look the end of this post).
    • Also try give the player some information how to solve this puzzle.



    Competition Rules

      • The idea have to be yours.
      • You can make unlimited amount of entries.
      • I will have all the rights to edit the rules all the time(I will do it correctly and I will be fair for everyone).




      Competition Prizes

      The winner of this competition will have his or her name to Hall Of Fame and will be credited as "Competition Winners" and "Idea Giver". If you have one more than once you'll be credited automatically as "Great Idea Giver". Also any other ideas that I'll use will be credited as "Idea Giver".



      Judging

      I'm the only one who will judge the winner of the competition. I will judge all entries. The amount of entries you post will not decrease your chance to win in any way. However, if there are a lot of entries or horrible entries, I'll have the right to kick some of them away in order to make the final judge easier for me.

      This is the order how I judge:

        • Is your idea creative and fresh?
        • Can I possibly create your idea?
        • Is the puzzle small enough so I can put it to chapter 6?
        • The presentation?




        Deadline

        The competition begins immediately and conclude at earliest 15.12.2011 or when I judge the competition.



        Final Words

        Good luck, may the best idea win. If you have questions, ask.
        « Last Edit: December 08, 2011, 04:28:18 am by Aeroblyctos »

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        Re: Competition #33
        « Reply #1 on: November 22, 2011, 09:02:03 am »
        It would be good if the puzzle would fit there but I think it's possible to get some more space.

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        Not as good as DD:D
        « Reply #2 on: November 22, 2011, 11:29:40 am »
                                                        Phodom Alone
                                                                 Puzzle


        Phodom and Fradz enter the area - Dialogue

        Phodom:Well , Fradz , here we are , another complicated labirinth.
        Fradz:Way to ea-
        ? ? ?: Fradz , it's  time.
        Phodom:Sorry , did you say something?
        Fradz:Enter alone , Phodom.I got something to do outside Kar'gath.
        Phodom:This is irrevelant , you can't jus leave me.
        *Fradz gets outside the labirinth*
        Fradz:Sorry , Phodom.I cannot be part of this  , call me when you're done.
        *Fradz gets hit by lightning , then teleports himself out of the labirinth*
        Phodom:Fradz , wait!Damn!Now I'm stuck here alone , unless I call him and give up.

        If Phodoms gets out of the Puzzle area , Fradz will come and the quest will fail
        In every corner of the area , there is a champion skeleton with huge hp , no mp , huge atk but low AS.The skeleton has reincarnation with 0 calldown , but takes 50 seconds to reincarnate.

        After 25 killed skeletons - Cinematic

        Phodom:Curse this!When will it end?

        ? ? ?:Calm yourself Phodom.
        Phodom:Who...are you?

        ? ? ?:I'l give you a gift Phodom.
        Phodom:What ...Is happening!?!

        The skeletons all @ the area are charging to Phodom.Phodom gets blessed(+500dmg , +30 armor ,+6000 hp , +3000 mp , + 100 all stats , + 25 hp regen).After 1 minute off skeletons:

        Phodom:This is amazing!Yet they keep coming.You , hwo gaved me this power , show yourself!
        *A ilusion of Fradz gets inside the area*
        Ilusion:Phodom , you have turned your back on me , prepare to die!


        Skeletons are still attacking Phodom , while Phodom must cocentrate only on the ilusion(wich blinks).
        When the Ilusion dies:


        Phodom:What have I done?
        *All skeletons die*
        Phodom:Fradz  , answer me!

        ? ? ?:Well done , dragon slayer.
        Phodom:You!I don't need this power , give me back Fradz!
        *Phodom looses the bonus*

        ? ? ?:Hahahahah!
        *The illusion is coming back to life , while all other skeletons on the ground are shifting into innocent people.
        Man1:Kill him , Phodom , save us!
        Women1:Don't fail us like you faild your family!
        Phodom:What...What is the meaning of tihis!?!

        *Phodom slams the ground with all his might , turning the people into bones once more.
        Ilusion:Thank you , Phodom.
        *Phodom teleports himself out of the area*
        Phodom:What has happend ...Fradz?
        Fradz:Old fatass!Where have you been?
        Phodom:I am so happy to see you again.
        Fradz:Gross!
        *Phodom and fradz are moving back to the corridor , but Phodom turns and looks to the labirinth*

        Phodom(whisper):What was that?I've grow tired of secrets
        ? ? ?:All in time , Dragon Slayer.

        Reward:10 honor points(yeah it might be to much but the skeletons should be realy strong  , even when Phodom is overpowered).
        « Last Edit: November 22, 2011, 11:31:29 am by Blackdoom59 »

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        Re: Competition #33
        « Reply #3 on: November 22, 2011, 12:08:30 pm »
        Hello,

        This post has been taken back to the Den by author.
        « Last Edit: November 23, 2011, 09:12:47 am by DD Canada »

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        Re: Competition #33
        « Reply #4 on: November 23, 2011, 01:18:20 pm »
        Hello,

        No it hasn't.

        Hold on, I know this one.

        A wizzard did it, right? ;P

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        Re: Competition #33
        « Reply #5 on: November 23, 2011, 02:42:26 pm »
        Hello,

        No it hasn't.

        Hold on, I know this one.

        A wizzard did it, right? ;P

        Well ...erm...(ah f*ck...).
        Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
        ^.^ - no?
        <.< - Black wall...Blackdoom...Blackwalldoom!
        >.> - Nothing , really?The hell?
        >.< - I've got something on my face.

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        Re: Competition #33
        « Reply #6 on: November 26, 2011, 05:46:42 am »
        REVENGE OF DOOM LORD - MINI GAME/BOSS ARENA
        Disclaimer: Texts in <....> represent actions.
        Requirement: Completed Portal quest in chapter 5 and acquired Doom Sword.
        Location: The room in the middle of the competition picture (Same as DD's).
        Description: The mini-game has 5 stages:
        • ENTRANCE: Cinematic: (some soothing music required)
          P: This room seems so strange, the scent ... it is so familiar. Like my wife's.
          F: I can't smell anything.
          P: You don't even know her. How could you ...

          <A 30% transparent Birgitta appears near Phodom>
          P: Birgitta ...
          F: What the heck ? - Stop Phodom, it's a trap !
          P: You're a fool to say that, Fradz. Birgitta, I'm home again. I'll never let you go out of my reach. We'll rebuild our family.

          <Phodom walks near the illusion>
          F: STOP! - Damnit Phodom, you geezer!
          ? ? ? : Now you'll pay dearly for what you have done to me back in Dragon Inn.
          <A black Doom Lord appears near Phodom, replacing the Birgitta illusion. He swings his sword and Phodom fell to the ground (unconscious - not dead yet)>
          Doom Lord: Finally, such an easy prey - Now I'll reclaim my weapon.
          <If P has Doom Sword -> Cinematic continues -> If F has Doom Sword, Doom Lord teleports near Fradz. He swings his sword and Fradz fell to the ground -> Doom Sword is removed from inventory>
          Doom Lord: This warrior is perfect for my upcoming ritual - with his vengeance and power, I'll be invincible.
          <Doom Lord teleports away, taking Phodom with him>
          Interlude: After 15 minutes...
          F: Ugh, my head. What happened ?
          ? ? ? : Phodom has been abducted. Make haste before all is too late.
          F: It doesn't look like I have another option.

          <Fradz moves forward>
        • BATTLE #1 - FIRST GATE
          • Cinematic:
            F: Show yourself. I'm here to take Phodom back.
            <Doom Lord appears near Fradz, trying to backstab him but Fradz evades the blow successfully>
            Doom Lord: You're quick. Let's see how quick you can be. Forward my minions, destroy this insect for me.
            <Doom Lord summons few smaller Doom Guards then teleports away>
            F: Bring it on.
          • Battle:
            2 portals appear on each side of the corridor. Doom Guards will spawn from the portals. Kill 10 Doom Guards to open the gate to the next battle or kill 25 Doom Guards to complete the Battle. If the Battle is completed successfully the player is given a "Destiny's Sword fragment". 
        • BATTLE #2 - SECOND GATE
          • Cinematic:
            F: Give Phodom back !
            <Doom Lord appears near Fradz, trying to backstab him but Fradz again evades the blow successfully>
            Doom Lord: You're lucky indeed. But your little friend here won't be as lucky as you. As soon as the ritual is completed, his body is MINE !
            <Doom Lord calls down multiple Infernals then teleports away>
            F: I have to save that fatass - And quick.
            <A 20 minute timer starts counting down>
          • Battle:
            An invulnerable Portal appears at the end of the corridor. Infernals will spawn from the Portal. For each 10 Infernals killed, a Hellfire Infernal will be spawned. Each Hellfire Infernal killed will reduce the Portal's HP by 35%. Kill a Hellfire Infernal to open the gate to the next battle or destroy the Portal to complete the Battle. If the Battle is completed successfully the player is given a "Destiny's Sword fragment".
        • BATTLE #3 - THIRD GATE
          • Cinematic:
            F: Come and fight me, you coward. Stop being such a sissy monster.
            <Doom Lord appears near Fradz>
            Doom Lord: Very well then. See if you can hold on to your words.
            F: One shall stand, one shall fall.
          • Battle:
            The objective in this battle is to reduce Doom Lord's HP to 75%. Doom Lord in this stage has War Stomp (stunning for 3 seconds) and Cripple (reducing AS and MS by 45%). The player can steal a "Destiny's Sword fragment" from Doom Lord during this battle.
          • Cinematic:
            Doom Lord: You're much stronger than I thought. But no matter, the ritual is near complete. My ascension is near !
            <Doom Lord teleports away>
            F: I will hunt you down no matter what. Do you hear me !!!
        • BATTLE #4 - FOURTH GATE
          • Cinematic:
            F: Will this ever end ?
            ? ? ? : Phodom's life is at stake. You mustn't let him down.
            F: I won't.

            <Doom Lord appears near Fradz>
            Doom Lord: Looks like you are about to.
            F: You coward. Just end this right here right now.
            Doom Lord: As you wish. Your quest shall end here.
          • Battle:
            The objective in this battle is to reduce Doom Lord's HP to 50% (his starting HP is still 100%). Doom Lord in this stage has War Stomp (stunning for 3 seconds), Cripple (reducing AS and MS by 45%) and Summoning Doom Guards. The player can (again) steal a "Destiny's Sword fragment" from Doom Lord during this battle.
          • Cinematic:
            Doom Lord: You're powerful but you've run out of time, hero. I won.
            <Doom Lord teleports away>
            <Timer stops counting>
            F: Damnit. Can't be !
        • BATTLE #5 - FIFTH GATE
          • Cinematic:
            F: No, it can't be.
            <Doom Lord appears near Fradz>
            Doom Lord: His body is mine now !
            <Doom Lord summons Phodom and attempts to finish the ritual>
            ? ? ? : Don't even dream about it.
            <A bolt of lightning strikes down, knocking back Doom Lord and waking Phodom>
            P: What ? ... Where am I ?... It feels like a dream of blackness.
            Doom Lord: My power. My destiny. NOOOOOO!
            Doom Lord: Both of you shall die here. You shall all become sacrifices for my ritual !

          • Battle:
            The objective in this battle is to slay Doom Lord. Doom Lord in this stage has War Stomp (stunning for 3 seconds), Cripple (reducing AS and MS by 45%), Summoning Doom Guards and Summoning Infernals. The player can (once again) steal a "Destiny's Sword fragment" from Doom Lord during this battle.
          • Cinematic:
            Doom Lord: My ... destiny. Don't stop ... me ... from ... my destiny ... I ... failed you ... master !
            <Doom Lord falls down>
            F: He is slain. How did he get resurrected anyways ?
            P: Maybe we will never know.

        • REWARD
          Doom Lord drops Destiny's Sword and Doom Sword (taken earlier). The Destiny's Sword can be upgraded with fragments collected from previous battles. For example a player collects 3 fragments and Destiny's Sword can be upgraded up to Destiny's Sword III (the Romanian number represents the number of fragments and the power of the item).

        « Last Edit: December 25, 2011, 02:25:17 am by Doomlord »

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        Re: Competition #33
        « Reply #7 on: November 26, 2011, 06:22:39 am »
        Hello,

        That's a nice one, doomlord, the basic format is close to mine, but you've even more options and other tweaks, that could be for better or worse, I don't know, but I like the "comeback" of doom lord. :)

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        Re: Competition #33
        « Reply #8 on: November 26, 2011, 06:28:25 am »
        Hello,

        That's a nice one, doomlord, the basic format is close to mine, but you've even more options and other tweaks, that could be for better or worse, I don't know, but I like the "comeback" of doom lord. :)
        Not that close really.This took me over an hour to complete the format. And yeh, I will come back.

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        Re: Competition #33
        « Reply #9 on: November 26, 2011, 06:29:31 am »
        Epic dude , but  ? ? ? is not Fradz's inner voice ,he's somebody else(Change that plz)

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        Re: Competition #33
        « Reply #10 on: November 26, 2011, 06:34:55 am »
        Epic dude , but  ? ? ? is not Fradz's inner voice ,he's somebody else(Change that plz)
        I know who that guy is. But this is chapter 6, don't spoil details. Just put that guy as a mysterious voice or inner voice is enough.

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        2nd Entry
        « Reply #11 on: November 26, 2011, 07:05:38 am »
                                                                The fallen ruler


        Phodom & Fradz enter the area - Cutscene

        P:Hmm...
        F:What's it?
        P:Can't you smell?The stink of death ...is all @ Kar'gath , but not here...
        F:Well , they followed my advice and cleaned this place up!
        P:Fradz ...No man walked in this place for such a long time..
        *A wisp appears in front of Phodom and Fradz*
        W:Weclome , gladiotors!
        P:We are dr..
        W:You shall fight for me , the ruler of Kar'gath , in an epic adventure all @ it!
        F:Say what?
        W:Wait , you are not my citizens!You are not rezidents!
        P:No , we are....visitors.
        W:Then , you shall die

        The wisp has  a low ammount of hp , a good amount of mp and no dmg , but it casts fire spells
        When wisp dies- CInematic

        F:Easy...
        P:Now what?
        F:Room 2!
        *P and F enter room 2 , a wisp appears next to them*
        W:Welcome gladiotors!
        P:This feels odd...
        W:You shall fight for me , the ruler of Kar'gath , in an epic adventure all @ it!
        P:No , we won't!
        W:Yes you will!Eighterway , you shall face me!
        F:Oh , God...

        After 2nd wisp dies

        P:Next area
        *Next area , new wisp*
        F:NOT AGAIN!
        W:Welcome gladiators!
        P:Well meet , mighty ruler!
        F:What?
        W:You shall fight for me , the ruler of Kar'gath , in an epic adventure all @ it!
        P:True  , mighty ruler
        F:WHAT?
        P(Whisper):Fradz , do like me...
        W:Huh?Whisper...No whispers allowed , you shall face me!
        P:Fradz!
        F:Sorry!

        *Next area*

        W:Welcome , gladiators!
        P:Well met , ruler!
        W:You shall fight for me , the ruler of Kar'gath , in an epic adventure all @ it!
        P:Yes sir!
        *The wisp teleports , then some other wisps show up ( low wisps) attacking the heroes*
        If a wisp dies ,  a rune is summoned ,there are 30 wisps in total , 30 runes.
        After our players aquire all the runes...
        W:Good work , gladiators!But there is no other way , if you don't fight yourselfs , you shall be both executed!
        F:Oh yes , mighty ruler!
        P:No , we won't!
        W:Verry well...
        F:What'cha doin'?
        P:Wait...
        W:EXECUTIONERS!!!
        P:Wait..
        W:Were are theese..
        W:Oh..Oh no , I remember , I have been defeated by that sorcer...
        P:Everyone has it's time...
        W:Yet still , I am a wisp ...I require power , give me your power , so I can reborn!


        Interactive choice
        A-Kill the wisp

        P:You don't deserve power for what you have done to us!
        *Phodom kills the wisp , both him and fradz get teleported to the begaining*
        P:That was all , Fradz...
        W:Welcome , gladiators!
        P:Oh no...(so the quest restarts)

        B-Give power to the wisp

        P:Here , all of our mana points!
        F:F*ck!
        W:I need more , kill 20 wisps!


        20 wisps randomly spawn , having the big wisp helping them , Phodom and Fradz must kill the wisps without spells.After that-Cinematic

        *W turns into a lich-like rezident*
        W:Thank you heroes!Soon , I will start the rebelion against this power, and I will turn Kar'gath into a peacefull fortress once more!
        P:Let us see...
        *The heroes along W are moving to the first city inside Kar'gath*
        W:I will prepare the army now , you deserve a reward - take this(W gives something to them)
        P:We wish you luck , ruler.
        F:Ass!


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        Re: Competition #33
        « Reply #12 on: November 26, 2011, 07:07:06 am »
        Epic dude , but  ? ? ? is not Fradz's inner voice ,he's somebody else(Change that plz)
        I know who that guy is. But this is chapter 6, don't spoil details. Just put that guy as a mysterious voice or inner voice is enough.

        Yeah..So deleate (Frad'z inner voice) from your posts , and let it be only ? ? ?

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        Re: Competition #33
        « Reply #13 on: November 26, 2011, 07:19:46 am »
        Epic dude , but  ? ? ? is not Fradz's inner voice ,he's somebody else(Change that plz)
        I know who that guy is. But this is chapter 6, don't spoil details. Just put that guy as a mysterious voice or inner voice is enough.

        Yeah..So deleate (Frad'z inner voice) from your posts , and let it be only ? ? ?
        Fine. I did it. But I still left one to avoid confusion.

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        Re: Competition #33
        « Reply #14 on: November 26, 2011, 07:30:15 am »
        F*ck , deleate that one 2 :((