The Chosen Ones

Hey, thanks for the reply it was enterteining to read such a great message. I written down some things that I'll improve.

It was something new for me that someone thinks the story is just about killing Xada and his master. I can say that that is actually the first part of the story and the second part starts after that.

why didn't Phodom tell Fradz that someone had killed his entire family, but only told him that he killed his chickens?

Because he didn't want to accept that his family was murdered at that point. He couldn't tell that to anyone yet before he accepts it by himself, which he'll eventually do. There are some parts in the story already that is not yet told, but everything will be told in a way or another. Also I haven't done/remade interludes yet.