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Pourquoi

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Yes.
I fixed the spelling/grammar mistakes and added more information about items.
And for the spoilers, just use a <PLOT SCENE> tag instead of revealing the story.
« Last Edit: May 17, 2011, 01:45:53 am by Chimto »
Along the shore the cloud waves break,
The twin suns sink behind the lake,
The shadows lengthen
In Carcosa.

Strange is the night where black stars rise,
And strange moons circle through the skies,
But stranger still is
Lost Carcosa.

Songs that the Hyades shall sing,
Where flap the tatters of the King,
Must die unheard in
Dim Carcosa.

Song of my soul, my voice is dead,
Die thou, unsung, as tears unshed
Shall dry and die in
Lost Carcosa.
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EDIT: ok i'm going to use the part you corrected to add names and things like that, but i like my style of being a bit personal instead of just, go here, go there style, so i'm going to use the edits, but not as they are, hope you understand :S


(before edit:)but i have to admit, i'm at a lost again, what do you mean by the "And for the spoilers, just use a <PLOT SCENE> tag instead of revealing the story"? is it like the:
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[spoiler]example[/spoiler]?
« Last Edit: May 17, 2011, 04:53:36 am by Banpower1 »
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No. It's not like that.
I meant that instead of writing:
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Now that everything is cleaned out on the map, for now, run back home to your wife to activate the further parts of the main quest.
Your child has been taken by a monster! No need to hurry though, no timed events here.
You should simply use:
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<PLOT SCENE>
To avoid spoilers.
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When passing the Ogre mountain you will be assulted by an assassin,
The correct word is 'ambush'. Not 'assult'.
Oh, and I have provided you with a strategy against the epic boss in the post-proofreading version.
« Last Edit: May 17, 2011, 05:24:42 am by Chimto »
Along the shore the cloud waves break,
The twin suns sink behind the lake,
The shadows lengthen
In Carcosa.

Strange is the night where black stars rise,
And strange moons circle through the skies,
But stranger still is
Lost Carcosa.

Songs that the Hyades shall sing,
Where flap the tatters of the King,
Must die unheard in
Dim Carcosa.

Song of my soul, my voice is dead,
Die thou, unsung, as tears unshed
Shall dry and die in
Lost Carcosa.
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Banpower1

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ahh i get the point... but cant we just assume that players that are reading a walkthrough already gave up on trying to find out the plot themselves? i can add a warning in the beginning saying that the walkthrough will contain spoilers, but i'd like to keep them in there, since they give a sort of anchors, to where you are in the storyline... this is at least the way i'm making it, but i do see that an official guide would be without spoilers and without personal things in it, but its not an official guide, its the guide by me :P (hope you do not read this as "**** you i'm not going to listen", because i really love the input and corrections you've given so far, especially the names and things like that, cause i suck at naming :S )
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ahh i get the point... but cant we just assume that players that are reading a walkthrough already gave up on trying to find out the plot themselves? i can add a warning in the beginning saying that the walkthrough will contain spoilers, but i'd like to keep them in there, since they give a sort of anchors, to where you are in the storyline...
I never like it when the story is suddenly spoiled when I'm looking at a walkthrough searching for a specific boss strategy.
(If you want to keep them, at least put them in spoiler tags)
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without personal things in it
If there were too much personal things, it will just become a 'Let's Play!' thing.
« Last Edit: July 04, 2011, 03:04:09 am by Chimto »
Along the shore the cloud waves break,
The twin suns sink behind the lake,
The shadows lengthen
In Carcosa.

Strange is the night where black stars rise,
And strange moons circle through the skies,
But stranger still is
Lost Carcosa.

Songs that the Hyades shall sing,
Where flap the tatters of the King,
Must die unheard in
Dim Carcosa.

Song of my soul, my voice is dead,
Die thou, unsung, as tears unshed
Shall dry and die in
Lost Carcosa.
TCO Item List