The Chosen Ones

Hey, Chimto told me that the description includes a lot of grammar errors. So what do you think if we descriptions like this in the future:

Thunder Boots(Fradz's first ultimate set piece, first upgrade)

NEW
+6 Armor
+30 Agility
+500 Hit Points
+Gives an aura that increases nearby friendly units' attack speed by 15% and movement speed by 30%.
+Every attack restores hit points(lvlx3) and mana(lvlx0,5) and every spell restores hit points(lvlx15) and mana(lvlx2,5).

OLD
Increases the armor by 6, the agility by 30 and the hit points of Fradz by 500 when worn. Gives an aura that increases nearby friendly units' attack speed by 15% and movement speed by 30%. Every attack restores hit points(lvlx3) and mana(lvlx0,5) and every spell restores hit points(lvlx15) and mana(lvlx2,5).

Is this a good way or not? Does this need improvements?

That is a LOT better.  Not necessarily because of grammar, but because of readability.  Thanks for continually improving TCOCampaign.  I enjoy it regularly