EDIT: ok i'm going to use the part you corrected to add names and things like that, but i like my style of being a bit personal instead of just, go here, go there style, so i'm going to use the edits, but not as they are, hope you understand :S
(before edit:)but i have to admit, i'm at a lost again, what do you mean by the "And for the spoilers, just use a <PLOT SCENE> tag instead of revealing the story"? is it like the: [spoiler]example[/spoiler]
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