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Jaelbird

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Re: Boss Ideas
« on: March 22, 2013, 12:30:11 pm »
i think u should paragraph that a lil

when i read it i constantly get confused where i was again

for example add a space every 4 lines or something
"Wohoo, we spent five hundred kay on the ground, isn't that great? I love wasting money."