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Jynnx

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SUGGESTED FIX #5 - GAME MENUS / CONTROL PANEL STUFFS
« on: March 18, 2012, 08:01:06 pm »
COMMAND PANEL

STEAL -
[current] [...] Click the enemy unit to see if he has any items to be stolen. You can view your stealing chance of each character from the multiboard, but remember that some enemies has higher defense against stealing lowering the chance you see in the multiboard.
[suggested correction] [...] Click the enemy unit to see if he has any items to be stolen. You can view your stealing chance for each character on the multiboard, but remember that some enemies have higher defense against stealing, lowering the chance you see on the multiboard.
SUGGESTION [...] Click the enemy unit to see if he has any items that can be stolen. [...]


GAME PANEL

EAT FOOD - not sure if this is an error correct or a suggestion...
[current] Use a food from any box you currently have. [...]
[suggested correction] Use food from any box you currently have. [...]



PROFESSIONS

TREASURE HUNTER INFORMATION -
[current] [...] Some items are however harder and need Dig Power in order to get digged out successfully. [...]
[suggested correction] [...] Some items are harder to get and need Dig Power in order to get dug out successfully. [...]

BATTLE THIEF INFORMATION -
[current] [last sentence of first paragraph] [...] Look in the bosses inventories to check if they got items to steal.
Stealing succeeded means that you have successfully stealed an item and it is given to your inventory if there's space. [...]
[suggested correction]  [...] Look in the bosses' inventories to check if they have items to steal.
Stealing succeeded means that you have successfully stolen an item and it is added to your inventory if there's space. [...]

ALCHEMIST INFORMATION -
[current] Alchemists create powerful potions that increases the drinker's stats permanently.
[suggested correction] Alchemists create powerful potions that increase the drinker's stats permanently.

ALCHEMIST STORY - note - GREAT use of the word 'quaffer' !!!

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