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Re: Grammar Corrections
« Reply #15 on: March 19, 2012, 05:21:16 am »
For your information: in the item list I've fixed all grammar/spelling mistakes in descriptions, so you don't need to do that all over again.
Along the shore the cloud waves break,
The twin suns sink behind the lake,
The shadows lengthen
In Carcosa.

Strange is the night where black stars rise,
And strange moons circle through the skies,
But stranger still is
Lost Carcosa.

Songs that the Hyades shall sing,
Where flap the tatters of the King,
Must die unheard in
Dim Carcosa.

Song of my soul, my voice is dead,
Die thou, unsung, as tears unshed
Shall dry and die in
Lost Carcosa.
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Re: Grammar Corrections
« Reply #16 on: March 19, 2012, 10:48:09 am »
Aero:  Ok, I can go ahead and go into editor and copy / edit / paste into forums, but can you check what is already posted and tell me what corrections / suggestions you do NOT want to use.  That way you won't have to search through all of the descriptions to see if the edited version is OK.  (I don't want to just assume you will use my corrections / suggestions)
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Re: Grammar Corrections
« Reply #17 on: March 20, 2012, 03:33:35 am »
This will take a year and all my motivation if I start to now look all these grammar errors. Copy is fine because then I don't need to use my head I just copy things.

I'll now just focus on this new version and in minor version I can look to minor things like grammar errors.

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Re: Grammar Corrections
« Reply #18 on: March 21, 2012, 09:46:46 am »
Sorry, been having a bit of trouble with my internet.  By Sunday at latest, I will start a new thread with full description changes from editor for Aero to just copy & paste (And a request to put comments in this thread) .  Please if anyone has any problems with suggestion/corrections PLEASE post here so I do not include them in the new thread. Or if there is a better way to do this, let me know!
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Re: Grammar Corrections
« Reply #19 on: April 22, 2012, 05:28:59 am »
I believe the other thread of yours is more efficent and this thread no longer has a purpose. If it does, notify me.

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