The Chosen Ones

Like doomlord said, send me a Screenshot and at least tell me the chapter. But not for grammar or spelling mistakes, I can easily see those. It's rather possible that I overlook content-wise faults, so therefor a reminder which dialogues have faults like that would be nice.
And about that thing being more fitting to a final version:
Aero just wants to completely change ch.3 and the main quest of ch.2, it's not that much that will be done for nothing